应用文写作（演讲稿与通知）【范文解析】(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片GrowingTogether，内容包括：1.短片内容：学校的发展；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作思维模板Step1三审定题体裁人称时态书面通知(格式与套用语，三段论)第三人称一般将来时Step2列明要点1通知主要内容(第一段)2详情1：短片名字与内容第二段3详情2：目的与意义4详情3：放映时间与地点5详情4：相关要求6结束套语：提希望(第三段)Step3斟词酌句：列关键词、重点短语和重要句型词汇attention,outstanding,development,beloved,meaningful,note,confidence短语relevant/relateddetails/information,notonly...butalso...,takepartin/joinin/participate,heateddiscussion,giveacomment,make14,it,haveagreattime句型被动语态，三大从句，祈使句Step4衔接过渡：串词成句，联句成文衔接词tobeginwith,besides,what’smore,afterwards,hopefully过渡句1.MayIhaveyourattention,please?2.Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.3.Itisbelievedthat...Step5润色升级：仔细推敲,用词升级1.interesting→_________2.have→_________3.someinformation→_________4.own→_________5.and→_________6.remember→_________7.opinion→_________8.believe→_________1.ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether.Itisaboutthedevelopmentofourownschool.→ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,________________.2.Ibelievethatthemoviewillbemeaningfulandinteresting.→__________________themoviewillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.3.Everybody,you’rewelcometotakepartinit.Pleaseenjoythemovie.Thenyoushouldhaveaheateddiscussionandgiveyourownopinions.→Everyoneofyou__________________takepartinit,enjoyingthemovie,___________________________afterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Step6完美成篇：认真工整，誊写在卷ANotice—Amovietobeshown14,Recently,anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Welcometojoinusandenjoyit!Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool.Itisbelievedthatthemoviewillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoononJune9th.What’smore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit,enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Hopefully,youwouldmakeittoouractivity.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.TheStudents’Union【答案】Step5润色升级词汇升级1.outstanding2.beshown3.relevantdetails4.beloved5.notonly...butalso...6.note7.comment8.have/holdthebelief/confidencethat...句式改造1.whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool2.Itisbelievedthat3.willbewelcometo;havingaheateddiscussion【写作模板】•演讲稿模板与套用句式TopicGoodafternoon.Fellowstudents/Distinguishedguests/HonorableJudges!Mynameis_________,from_________.Iamsohappytostandheretogiveaspeechtoallofyou.Mytopictodayis_________.Everybodyknowsthatit’simportantthat....whichcan_________(意义).Unfortunately,mostpeople_________(反面)becauseit’seasilytomakeadecisionbuthardtoputitintopractice(原因分析).Forexample,_________14,(事实或现象列举),inwhich...(后果).Besides,_________(进一步阐述理由).Solet’s_________(再次点题).That’sall.Thankyouforyourlistening/attention.•书面通知模板与套用句式Notice(Anactivitytobeheld)Boysandgirls,Inordertoimprove...,an_________(活动)willbeheld_________(地点和时间).Theactivityis_________(详细信息),whichwillbeveryinteresting/meaningful/significant.Attheendoftheactivity,_________(who)willdo_________(what).What’smore,you’resupposedto_________(要求).Allthestudentsofourclassareexpectedtobepresentontime._________(日期)_________(单位).•口头通知模板与套用句式AnAnnouncementLadiesandgentlemen/Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention?/Attention,please/Bequite,please!Ihaveanannouncementtomake/somethingimportanttotellyou.(正文)_________(who)willdo_________(what)_________(地点与时间)._________(详细信息)._________(要求一)._________(要求二).That’sall.Thankyou./Thankyouforyourlistening./Anyquestions?/Doeseveryoneunderstand?【模拟演练】1你校正在举办英语周活动，你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点：1.有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等；2.你的感悟。注意：1.词数120左右.2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。14,Goodmorning,everyone!It’sagreathonortobehereandsharesomethingwithyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Goodmorning,everybody!It’sagreathonourtobehereandsharesomethingwithyou.IstillrememberhowdepressedIwasafterthemidtermexaminationinSeniorOne,whenIhadhopedtobestillamongthebestasinjuniorhighschool.Atthattime,mybestfriendcameupandaskedmetogototheplayground.“You'realwaysthebestinmyheart,”shecomfortedme.“Thereisalwaysaroadahead.”Strangely,myheartwasfilledwithwarmthIhadneversensedbefore.Ifeltmuchbetter.Sharingispartofbeauty.JustasaSwedishproverbgoes,“Sharedjoyisadoublejoy;sharedsorrowishalfasorrow.”Sharingcanbroadenourhorizons.Asforme,bydoingthis,Iliveahappierandmoreconfidentlife.Thanksforyourattention!【解析】这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：It’sagreathonourtodosth.、sharesomethingwith、comeup、liveahappierandmoreconfidentlife等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：atthattime、strangely等，使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时，时态做到使用准确。214,感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。假设你校正在举行一场有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你在“父母、老师、朋友”中选择一个感恩对象，写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛。内容要点如下：1.为何感恩；2.如何感恩。注意：1．词数120左右；2．演讲稿中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．演讲稿的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。Goodafternoon,everyone!it’sagreathonortohavetheopportunitytobewithyoutoday.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Thankyou,…”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Goodafternoon,everyone!it’sagreathonortohavetheopportunitytobewithyoutoday.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Thankyou,mum”Likemanyofyou,mylifehasbeenblessedwithamotherwhoisasourceofunconditionallove.MymumisanordinaryhousewifewhileIhighlyappreciateherkindconsideration.Shekeepsmecompany,cooksmetastydinners,andmakesmyroomascleanaspossible.Ontopofthat,wheneverIgetupset,shelistenstomeandcomfortsmeuntilIhavecheeredup.I’mfortunatetohavesuchacaringmother.Weknowthechallengingexamtorealizedreamsisthereformeandyou.Iappealtoallofusheretoworkhardforourmums.Meanwhile,expressyourloveinreturnindailylife.Eitherasmalltalkwithmumoracupofteaforher,andherfacewilllightup.Thankyouforlistening.14,【解析】考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。本文根据写作要求应该分成两部分：第一部分选择一个感恩的对象，阐明感恩的原因；第二部分说明感恩的方式。【亮点说明】本文第二段的第一句直接指明感恩的对象，并运用短语：likemanyofyou，引起大伙的共鸣。在这一段中同时又运用高级词汇如：beblessedwith、asourceofunconditionallove、keepsb.company、ontopof等。这一段最后，用一句话总结了对母亲的感恩之情。最后一段中也同样使用高级短语诸如：appealtosb.todo、inreturn等等。这是一篇演讲稿，句子不求多复杂，主要是能够使听众能够理解，产生共鸣。3假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“BeingGratefultoOurParents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.介绍演讲主题；2.说明感恩原因；3.号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。BeingGratefultoOurParentsBoysandgirls,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】14,Boysandgirls,Goodmorning,everyone!I’mLiHua.It'smygreathonourtobehereanddelivermyspeech.Thetopicofmyspeechis“BeingGratefultoOurParents”.Firstandforemost,thereisnodenyingthatitisourparentswhogiveuslives,sparenoefforttolookafterusandbringusup.Inaddition,inordertomakeuslivebetter,sodiligentaretheythattheykeeponworkingalldaylong.Mostimportantly,whenwegetintotroubleandareindesperateneedofhelp,theywillalwayssupportusandencourageuswithconstantcareandlove.Soitishightimethatweshouldshowourgratitudetothemandputitintoaction.Wishtheycouldalwaysbehappyandhealthy!Manythanksforyourattention.【解析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“BeingGratefultoOurParents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.介绍演讲主题；2.说明感恩原因；3.号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：deliverspeech(发表演讲)；begratefultosb.(感激某人)；firstandforemost(首先)；thereisnodenyingthat…(不可否认……)；sparenoeffortto(不遗余力……)；lookafter(照顾)；bringup(抚养)；inaddition(另外)；inorderto(为了)；getintotrouble(陷入麻烦)；indesperateneedof(迫切需要……)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【范文点评】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Firstandforemost,thereisnodenyingthatitisourparentswhogiveuslives,sparenoefforttolookafterusandbringusup.运用了同位语从句和强调句；Mostimportantly,whenwegetintotroubleandareindesperateneedofhelp,theywillalwayssupportusandencourageuswithconstantcareand14,love.运用时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4你班打算在下周日下午举行讲英语故事的比赛。假如你是英语课代表，请你在班上口头通知此事。该口头通知需包括活动益处、具体时间、地点、评委及要求等内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou.NextSundayafternoon,ourclassisgoingtoholdanEnglishstorytellingcompetitioninthelecturehallinourschool.Everybodyisrequiredtotakepartintheactivity.TwoforeignEnglishteacherswillbeinvitedtoactasjudges.Theactivitywillbenefityouinmanyways.Forexample,itwillgiveyouagoodchancetopracticeyouroralEnglish,trainyourcommunicationskillsandimproveyourabilityofexpressingyourself.Besides,itwillinspireyourinterestinEnglish.Therequirementsareasfollows.First,thestorymustbeoriginal.Thatis,thestorymustbemadeupbyyourself.Second,thestorymustbepresentedinEnglish.Third,thestoryshouldbeinteresting.Finally,yourstoryshouldbefinishedwithinthreeminutes.Anyquestions?OK.That’sall,thankyou.【解析】本文是一篇口头通知，同学们写作时需要套用口头通知的功能句。本篇写作要求大14,体上规定了写作方向，没有具体的写作要点，基本上属于开放性写作。所以同学们要在材料内容和谋篇布局上下功夫，可按照“比赛时间、地点→评委→活动益处→要求”的顺序安排写作。具体内容可根据自己的生活体验来想象和发挥，如“活动益处”可从激发对英语的兴趣、提高口语水平和锻炼表达能力等角度去展开。第一步：确定时态和功能句。本题要求写一则口头通知。因为主要谈论的是将来的计划，故基本时态为一般将来时。口头通知为应用文，需要注意一些固定的套语，如开头的称呼语Boysandgirls、提醒语MayIhaveyourattention，please和结尾的结束语That’sall，thankyou等内容。第二步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：beinvitedtoactasjudges（被邀请做评委）；benefityouinmanyways(让你受益很多)；practiceyouroralEnglish（练习口语）；trainyourcommunicationskills（训练交际能力）；inspireyourinterest（激发兴趣）等。第三步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。符合英语表达习惯，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【范文点评】文章格式符合口头通知的要求，语言规范，思路清晰，重点突出，详略得当，要点齐全，发挥适度。文章恰到好处地使用了较多的被动语态。作者在文中表现出了较为扎实的英语语言功底，如亮点短语：haveone’sattention，takepartin，actas，makeup，that’sall等；高级结构：be，requiredtodosth.，givesb.agoodchancetodosth.等。5为庆祝建校100周年，你校将举办学生校园摄影（photography）作品展。假如你是学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则通知，内容包括：1.作品要求；2.截止日期；3.投稿方式。注意：1.词数80左右；14,2.通知的格式已给出；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Notice__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’Union【答案】NoticeTocelebratethe100anniversaryofthefoundationofourschool,weareplanningtoholdacampusphotographyexhibition.Everyoneofyouiswelcometosubmityourphotos.Preference,byallmeans,willbegiventothoseentriesrecordingthemostimpressiveandmemorablemomentshappeningonthecampus.Originalityisalsoamongtherequirementsforbeingincluded.Plus,theentriesaresupposedtobeinspiringanduplifting,displayingthepositivesideofthecampuslife.Shouldyoubeinterested,emailyourentriesbeforeJuly20thto100thCPE@sina.com.TheStudents'Union【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一则通知。第1步：根据提示可知，为庆祝建校100周年，你校将举办学生校园摄影（photography）作品展。假如你是学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则通知，内容包括：1.作品要求；2.截止日期；3.投稿方式。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：anniversary(周年)；foundation(创立)；14,photographyexhibition(摄影展)；byallmeans(一定)；memorable(值得纪念的)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【范文点评】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Tocelebratethe100anniversaryofthefoundationofourschool,weareplanningtoholdacampusphotographyexhibition.非谓语动词的运用；Shouldyoubeinterested,emailyourentriesbeforeJuly20thto100thCPE@sina.com.运用了虚拟语气倒装。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。6假如你是学生会主席李华，你校将举行为期三天的庆祝建校五十周年的摄影展，请你用英语写一则通知。内容包括：1.举办目的；2.时间和地点；3.展览内容及活动。注意：1.通知的格式已经为你写好，不计入总词数；2.总词数：80左右Notice_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union14,July8th,2019【答案】NoticeOnbehalfofourschoolStudents’Union,I’mdelightedtoinviteallthestudentstowatchthePhotographyShow.Theshowwillbeheldfrom9to11onJulyinourschoolhall.Itisintendedtocelebratethe50thAnniversaryofthefoundingofourschool,whichwillarousestudents’passionandloveforcampus.Inpraiseofgreatachievementsourschoolhasmadeinrecentdecades,wehavearrangeddifferentkindsofactivities,suchaspoemrecitals,dancing,singandetc.,creatingavigorousfestivalatmosphere.Howeagerwearefortheearlyarrivaloftheday.Students’UnionJuly8th,2019【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一则通知；假如你是学生会主席李华，你校将举行为期三天的庆祝建校五十周年的摄影展，请你用英语写一则通知。内容包括：1.举办目的；2.时间和地点；3.展览内容及活动。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：onbehalfof（代表）；bedelighted（高兴）；PhotographyShow（摄影展）；schoolhall（学校大厅）；beintendedto（打算）；inpraiseof（赞扬）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【范文点评】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Itisintendedtocelebratethe50thAnniversaryofthefoundingofourschool,whichwillarousestudents’passionandloveforcampus.运用了非限定性定语从句；Inpraiseofgreatachievementsourschoolhasmadeinrecentdecades,wehavearrangeddifferentkindsofactivities,suchaspoemrecitals,dancing,singandetc.,creatingavigorousfestivalatmosphere.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式14,英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。14
