圈题作文：记叙文例题分析(一)(2022·淄博一模)3月1日下午(星期四)，一个美国中学生代表团到你校访问，师生一行十几人参观了学校，之后在你们班举行了一个小型座谈会，历时约一小时。事后，英语老师要求就当天的活动以日记的形式写一篇120个词左右的英语短文。座谈会主要内容：相互介绍；中方学生代表谈传统节日文化；美方学生代表谈兴趣爱好；自由交流。注意：1．可适当增加细节，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。2．日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。ThursdayMarch1,2022Fine_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________解析:这是一篇日记形式的记叙文。日记格式都已给出，所以它主要考察记叙文的写作方法。记叙文在高考当中考查的较少，但是也不可忽视。它的特点是：要求考生根据写作要求把事件或活动的时间、地点、人物、发生的事按照一定的顺序清楚的描写出来。可以有一两句对这件事的议论或看法。下面是一篇范文供大家借鉴ThursdayMarch1,2022FineThisafternoonanAmericanhighschooldelegation,consistingof10studentsand5teacherscametovisitourschool.Ourheadmastershowedthemaroundsomepartsoftheschool,suchasthelibrary,thelabandthegym.Fortunately,ourclasswaschosentohaveaninformaldiscussionwiththevisitors,whichwasagoodopportunityforustopracticeourEnglish.Everyoneatpresentwasactivetointroducethemselvesonebyone.Ourmonitor,Zhanghua，introducedtheChinesetraditionalfestivals,especiallytheChineseSpringFestival.SoonafterthatTom,anAmericanstudent,whowasagreatfanofYaoMingandJeremyShuhowLin,saidsomethingaboutNBAandsomeotherhobbies.Thenwetalkedaboutsomeothertopicsthatwewereinterestedin.Almostanhourhadpassedbeforewerealizedit.It'sreallyamazingtotalkwiththeAmericanteachersandstudentsinEnglish,whichhelpsusalotwithourEnglish.（2022杭州高三一模）生活中我们经历很多难忘的事，请你以“AnUnforgettableDay”为题用英语写一篇短文，讲述你的一次难忘的经历。解析:这是一篇记叙文，要求考生以“AnUnforgettableDay”为题记叙一件事。相比第一篇短文，这篇短文只给了题目，没有其他的提示，这就要求考生在脑海里搜集生活中的一些经历，把它编成符合本文要求的文章。这个题目还是比较常见的，抓住“难忘”来写，就理解了题目要求。当然，它也要有时间、地点、人物、发生的事等要素。-3-下面是一篇范文供大家借鉴AnUnforgettableDayLateoneafternoon,Iwasonmywayhomefromschool.Iwalkedslowlyalongthestreetwithmyheaddropped.Thescenesonbothsidesofthestreetwerebeautiful,butIhadnointerestinthematall.Iwalkedandwalked,thinkingofwhathadhappenedthatday.Justafewminutesbeforethesecondclassbeganthatafternoon,Iwasaskedtogototheteacher’soffice.Iheardmyteachertalkingtomymotherwithanger.“Howcouldyoudaretogotoseeafilmthismorningwithoutpermission?”Mothersaidatthetopofhervoice,slappingmeinthefaceheavily.Ilookedatmother,dumbfounded...Iwalkedmoreslowly,forIhadseenmyhouseahead,wheremotherwasalwaysstandingatthedoor,smilingatme,atthistimeeveryday.Butnow,shewasn’tthere.Myheartwasbeatingfaster.Ievendidn’tdaretoopenthedoorforfearthatmothershouldbeatagain.Notknowingwhattodo,Isatonthegroundnearthedoor,blamingmyselfforwhatIhaddone.Suddenlyasofthandpattedmeonthehead.Ilookedup,seeingmotherstandingbesideme.Icouldn’thelpcrying,“Mum!”tearsrollingdownmycheeks.举一反三突破提升请以“ASpecialSummerCamp”为题，发挥想象用英语写一篇短文，想象要符合逻辑，文章要连贯、通顺。字数100左右参考范文：ASpecialSummerCampDuringtheholidayItookpartinaspecialsummercampwithmyclassmates．TherewemadesomenewfriendswhowereseniorschoolstudentsfromLondon,Britain．Ashosts,weshowedthemaroundmanyplacesofinterestinBeijing,suchasthePalaceMuseum,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalace．ItoldthemaboutthegreatchangestakingplaceinBeijing．TheysaidBeijingwasquitedifferentfromwhattheyhadheardanditwasasbeautifulasLondon．Meanwhile,weimprovedourspokenEnglishwiththeirhelp．Ithinkthesummercampisofgreatvalue．请你写一篇英语日记，讲述你的一次难忘的经历。注意：字数100左右，日记格式已给出，不计入总数。参考范文：AnunforgettableexperienceSundayJuly4th,Fine-3-IwenttotheSummerPalaceyesterdaymorning.Afterenteringthemaingate,IhappenedtomeetsomeAmericanvisitors.Igreetedthemandwebegantalking.IgottoknowthattheywerecollegestudentstravellinginChina.IshowedthemtotheLongCorridor,theStoneShip,uptotheLongevityHillandsomeotherplaces.AfterthatwewentboatingonKunmingLake.WeallhadawonderfultimeintheSummerPalace.Whenwecameoutofthegate,Ihelpedthemdosomeshopping.Thentheythankedmeandleft.IfeltveryhappyandproudthatIcouldbeofsomehelptoforeignfriendsbyusingmyEnglishandgotagoodchancetopractisemyspokenEnglish.生活中我们会遇到很多让我们难忘的人，请你用英语写一篇短文，讲述一个给你留下深刻印象的人。注意：字数100左右，不要使用真实人名、校名。参考范文：Gregory,anAmerican,teachesEnglishinZhengzhouUniversity.HewasborninOctober1951.Aftergraduatingfromauniversityin1972,hewenttoSouthAfrica.Twentyyearslater,hecametoChinaandbecameateacherinZhengzhouUniversity.HelovesChinaandChinesestudentsverymuch.Healsotakesgreatinterestineducationalcause.Hehasalotofwaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inthepasteightyears,hehasputhisheartandsoulinhisworkandstudy.Heisconsideredasanhonest,humorousteacher,andheisrespectedandlovedbythestudentsandtheteachers.-3-
