2013高考英语二轮书面表达（四月）训练集（5）及参考范文假如你叫王方，乘出租车时丢了手提箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。内容要点：1．上午11点钟到达机场，然后带着5件行李乘一辆黄色出租车到假日酒店（HolidayInn）；2．到达酒店后，发现由于粗心将手提箱遗失在出租车上。不幸的是，未注意到出租车的车牌号；3．手提箱是黑色的，由塑料制成，尺寸大约为60cm×40cm×16cm；4．箱内有一台摄像机、两条长裤、三件衬衫、几本儿童读物以及一个钱包。钱包内有一张2,000美元的支票；5．你的联系电话是：0435-3940526。注意：1.词数100左右；2.文章的开头已为你写好。MynameisWangFang.Iarrivedattheairportat11am...学生作品：MynameisWangFang.Iarrivedattheairportat11am.ThenItookayellowtaxitotheHolidayInnwithfiveluggages.WhenIarrivedattheHolidayInn,Ifoundmysuitcasehadbeenleftinthetaxibecauseofmycarelessness.Unfortunately,Ididn'tnoticethetaxi'slicence.Thesuitcaseisblackandmadeofplastic.Itisabout60centimetreby40centimetreby16centimetre.Init,thereisacamera,twopairsoftrousers,threepiecesofshirts,severalbooksforchildrenandapurse.Inthepurse,thereisacheckof2,000dollars.Couldthefindermakerelationwithme?Mytelephonenumberis0435-3940526.Thankyou.WangFang点评：1.第一段第3句：luggage为不可数名词，fiveluggages表达不正确，可改为fivepiecesofluggage。2.第一段第5句：licence意为"执照"，不是"牌照"，故thetaxi'slicence可改为thenumberofthetaxi。3.第二段第2句：表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词，应把三个centimetre都改为centimetres。4.第二段第3句：Init过于简短，不必在其后停顿，其后逗号应去掉。5.第二段第3句：shirt是可数名词，threepiecesofshirts表达不正确，应改为threeshirts。6.第二段第4句：表示价值时，通常用介词for，故of最好改为for。7．第三段第1句：makerelationwithme表达不正确。习作者想表达"与我取得联系"，可改为getintouchwithme或returnthesuitcasetome。修改好的文章：MynameisWangFang.Iarrivedattheairportat11am.ThenItookayellowtaxitotheHolidayInnwithfivepiecesofluggage.WhenIarrivedattheHolidayInn,Ifoundmysuitcasehadbeenleftinthetaxibecauseofmycarelessness.Unfortunately,Ididn'tnoticethenumberofthetaxi.-4-\nThesuitcaseisblackandmadeofplastic.Itisabout60centimetresby40centimetresby16centimetres.Initthereisacamera,twopairsoftrousers,threeshirts,severalbooksforchildrenandapurse.Inthepurse,thereisacheckfor2,000dollars.Couldthefindergetintouchwithme?Mytelephonenumberis0435-3940526.Thankyou.WangFang******************************************************结束Lesson41 IllusionsofPastoralPeace 宁静田园生活的遐想 Thequietlifeofthecountryhasneverappealedtome.Citybornandcitybred,Ihavealwaysregardedthecountryassomethingyoulookatthroughatrainwindow,orsomethingyouoccasionallyvisitduringtheweekend.Mostofmyfriendsliveinthecity,yettheyalwaysgointorapturesatthemerementionofthecountry.Thoughtheyextolthevirtuesofthepeacefullife,onlyoneofthemhasevergonetoliveinthecountryandhewasbackintownwithinsixmonths.Evenhestilllivesundertheillusionthatcountrylifeissomehowsuperiortotownlife.Heisforevertalkingaboutthefriendlypeople,thecleanatmosphere,theclosenesstonatureandthegentlepaceofliving.Nothingcanbecompared,hemaintains,withthefirstcockcrow,thetwitteringofbirdsatdawn,thesightoftherisingsunglintingonthetreesandpastures.Thisidyllicpastoralsceneisonlypartofthepicture.MyfriendfailstomentionthelongandfriendlesswintereveningsinfrontoftheTV----virtuallytheonlyformofentertainment.Hesaysnothingaboutthepoorselectionofgoodsintheshops,oraboutthoseunfortunatepeoplewhohavetotravelfromthecountrytothecityeverydaytogettowork.Whypeoplearepreparedtotolerateafour-hourjourneyeachdayforthedubiousprivilegeoflivinginthecountryisbeyondme.Theycouldbesavedsomuchmiseryandexpenseiftheychosetoliveinthecitywheretheyrightlybelong.Ifyoucandowithoutthefewpastoralpleasuresofthecountry,youwillfindthecitycanprovideyouwiththebestthatlifecanoffer.Youneverhavetotravelmilestoseeyourfriends.Theyinvariablylivenearbyandarealwaysavailableforaninformalchatoranevening'sentertainment.Someofmyacquaintancesinthecountry-4-\ncomeuptotownonceortwiceayeartovisitthetheatreasaspecialtreat.Forthemthisisamajoroperationwhichinvolvesconsiderableplanning.Astheplaydrawstoitsclose,theywonderwhethertheywillevercatchthatlasttrainhome.Thecitydwellerneverexperiencesanxietiesofthissort.Thelatestexhibitions,films,orplaysareonlyashortbusrideaway.Shopping,too,isalwaysapleasure.Thereissomuchvarietythatyouneverhavetomakedowithsecondbest.Countrypeoplerunwildwhentheygoshoppinginthecityandstaggerhomeloadedwithasmanyoftheexoticitemsastheycancarry.Noristhecitywithoutitsmomentsofbeauty.Thereissomethingcomfortingaboutthewarmglowshedbyadvertisementsoncoldwetwinternights.Fewthingscouldbemoreimpressivethanthepeacethatdescendsondesertedcitystreetsatweekendswhenthethousandsthattraveltoworkeverydayaretuckedawayintheirhomesinthecountry.Ithasalwaysbeenamysterytomewhycitydwellers,whoappreciateallthesethings,obstinatelypretendthattheywouldprefertoliveinthecountry.宁静的乡村生活从来没有吸引过我。我生在城市，长在城市，总认为乡村是透过火车车窗看到的那个样子，或偶尔周末去游玩一下的景象。我的许多朋友都住在城市，但他们只要一提起乡村，马上就会变得欣喜若狂。尽管他们都交口称赞宁静的乡村生活的种种优点，但其中只有一人真去农村住过，而且不足6个月就回来了。即使他也仍存有幻觉，好像乡村生活就是比城市生活优越。他滔滔不绝地大谈友好的农民，洁净的空气，贴近大自然的环境和悠闲的生活节奏。他坚持认为，凌晨雄鸡第一声啼叫，黎明时分小鸟吱喳欢叫，冉冉升起的朝阳染红树木、牧场，此番美景无与伦比。但这种田园诗般的乡村风光仅仅是一个侧面。我的朋友没有提到在电视机前度过的漫长寂寞的冬夜——电视是唯一的娱乐形式。他也不说商店货物品种单调，以及那些每天不得不从乡下赶到城里工作的不幸的人们。人们为什么情愿每天在路上奔波4个小时去换取值得怀疑的乡间的优点，我是无法理解的。要是他们愿意住在本来属于他们的城市，则可以让他们省去诸多不便与节约大量开支。如果你愿舍弃乡下生活那一点点乐趣的话，那么你会发现城市可以为你提供生活中最美好的东西。你去看朋友根本不用跋涉好几英里，因为他们都住在附近，你随时可以同他们聊天或在晚-4-\n上一起娱乐。我在乡村有一些熟人，他们每年进城来看一回或几回戏，并把此看作一种特殊的享受。看戏在他们是件大事，需要精心计划。当戏快演完时，他们又为是否能赶上末班火车回家而犯愁。这种焦虑，城里人是从未体验过的。坐公共汽车几站路，就可看到最新的展览、电影、戏剧。买东西也是一种乐趣。物品品种繁多，从来不必用二等品来凑合。乡里人进城采购欣喜若狂，每次回家时都买足了外来商品，直到拿不动方才罢休，连走路都摇摇晃晃的。城市也并非没有良辰美景。寒冷潮湿的冬夜里，广告灯箱发出的暖光，会给人某种安慰。周末，当成千上万进城上班的人回到了他们的乡间寓所之后，空旷的街市笼罩着一种宁静的气氛，没有什么能比此时的宁静更令人难忘了。城里人对这一切心里很明白，却偏要执拗地装出他们喜欢住在乡村的样子，这对我来说一直是个谜。-4-
