题型训练写作（七）第一节短文改错假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dearsir,I’mwritingtotellyouthatwearehappytoseeournewlibraryopen.Itissobeautifulandgoodequippedthatweallliketospendoursparetimehere,andsomeproblemshavecomeup.Firstofall,therearen’taplentyofseatsinthereadingroom,sowecan’ttakenoteswhenread.Next,thelibraryiscloseatweekendswhentheyhavemoretimetoenjoyreading.Beside,wedon’tknowhowtosearchforthebooksthatweneed.Mysuggestionisthatourlibraryprovidesmoreseatsandopenatweekends.What’smore,computersshouldbesuppliedsothatwecanlearnaboutthenewbooksweborrow.Iwouldappreciateifyouconsidermyadvicesandtakestepstosolvethem.Yours,LiHua第二节书面表达\n假定你是李华，在英国一所中学作交换生，现在要参加一个关于“Food＆Culture”的演讲活动。你准备介绍一种中国传统食物---元宵。请从元宵的历史、寓意及做法等方面写一篇演讲稿。注意：1.词数120左右，开头已为你写好；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：蒸(steam)、炸(fry)、煮(boil)Dearfriends,I’mLiHua.Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtobehere...___________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.参考答案71.good改为well72.and改为but73.去掉a74.read改为reading75.close改为closed76.they改为we77.Beside改为Besides78.provides改为provide79.if前加it80.advices改为adviceDearfriends,I’mLiHua.IfeelgreatlyhonoredtobeheretointroducetoyouatraditionalChinesefood.Asyouknow,Chinesefoodenjoysworldwidepopularity.Nowletmetellyousomethingabout“yuanxiao”,whichismadeofricepowderwithsweetfillings,lookinglikeasmallwhiteball.Yuanxiaoortangyuancandatebacktoabout2,000yearsago.WeChinesepeopleeatyuanxiaoattheLanternFestival,whichisthefirstdaywithafullmoonofthenewyear.Yousee,theroundandwhiteballisjustlikethefullmoon.That’swhyweassociateitwithreunionandfullluck.Makingyuanxiaoisreallyteamworktocreateaharmoniousfamilyatmosphere.Waysofcookingitvaryfromplacetoplace.Generally,theyaresteamed,boiledorfried.Someareserveddrywithsugarwhileothersinsoup.IhopetheinformationaboveisofsomehelpforyoutoknowaboutChineseculture.Ifyouwanttoknowmoredetails,pleasecontactmeatanytime.WelcometogotoChinaforavisittoexperienceourfoodandcultureforyourself.\nThanksforlistening.
