人教课标高二必修5Unit4,,,新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面:,,即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、有美感，才能引人入胜。,是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华，也是信息传递的集中体现。,是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加充实。,新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，多用动词，长短句交错使用。,5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校报的英语记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。,要求：1.时间，地点，人物，活动。2.老人们的反应。3.简短评论。,,第一步认真审题(analyzetherequirements)第二步谋篇布局(drawupanoutline)第三步联句成篇(organizethesentences)第四步锦上添花(getthearticlepolishedup)第五步查漏补缺(checkthemistakes),审主题students,___________________审体裁________审人称________审时态____________审要求time,place,persons,activitiesreactionoftheelderlybriefevaluationdidvoluntaryworkaletterthethirdthepasttense｛,,标题(headline)StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshineWhatwouldbetheheadlineofthiscomposition?,导语(lead)LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,________SunshineNursingHomeand________________________.wenttodidsomevoluntarywork,正文(body)They_________theelderly_____flowersandfruits.Thentheystartedworkingatonce,__________________and________________.Everythingdone,theysatintheyard____________________________.presentedwithcleaningthewindowssweepingthefloorchattingwiththeelderlypeople,评语(evaluation)Whattheydidhasbrought____toothersand________theirownlives.joyenriched,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序空间顺序first,second,then,finally/atlast,soon,immediately,suddenlyhere,there,ononeside…ontheotherside, infrontof,atthebackof,nextto,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇对称顺序转折顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhandbut,however,while,though,otherwise,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇因果顺序条件顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇让步顺序递进顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)everwhat’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,what’sworse,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇表示总结inaword,altogether,allinall,ingeneral,Theygaveflowersandfruitstotheelderly.They_________theelderly____flowersandfruits.高级句式离不了presentedwith,Theysaidthestudentshaddonesomuchforthemandtheywouldneverforgetthem.Theysaiditwas_____abeautifulday_____theywouldrememberitforever.suchthat高级句式离不了,Whentheyarrived______theirarrival短语远比从句俏Upon,Theystartedworkingatonce,________thewindowsand________thefloor.2._______________,theysatintheyard________withtheelderlypeople.巧用分词cleaningsweepingEverythingdonechatting,名词性从句要用得妙Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.,Theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits._____theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor._______________,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.合理过渡离不了ThenEverythingdone,OnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.,Upontheirarrival,LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Thentheystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.,WhenItwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave,theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness.Theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldrememberitforever.LiYueandZhangHuaareveryhappy.Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.,
