1高考英语作文范文 <br /> 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） <br />注意： <br /> 1. 词数100左右; <br /> 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 <br />【答案】 <br />Dear Ms Jenkins, <br />I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. <br />In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me. <br />Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. <br />Yours, <br />Li Hua <br /> <br />【亮点】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。 <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br />2考高作文范文 <br />假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： <br />1. 栏目介绍。 <br />2. 稿件内容； <br />3. 稿件长度：约400词汇 <br />4. 交稿日期：6月28日前天 <br />注意： <br />1. 词数100左右； <br />2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的； <br />3. 开头语已为你写好。 <br />【参考答案】 <br />Dear Peter, <br />I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. <br />The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? <br />I’m looking forward to hearing from you. <br />Yours, <br />Li Hua <br />不够丰富【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as,look forward to , hear from等。 <br /> <br /> <br />3高考作文 <br />假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起...
