高考英语作文写作基础 — 如何写出好句子<br />如何写出好句子：好句子的标准应是：用词准确、逻辑清晰、简洁明了、可读性<br />强。<br />一. 学会运用复合句<br />复合句包括：名词性从句、状语从句、定语从句<br />用复合句增强句子之间的逻辑关系，使你的句子变得紧凑<br />例：（1）Children grow older. They prefer to be more independent rather than be at <br />the mercy of their parents.<br />When children grow older, they prefer to be more independent rather than be at the <br />mercy of their parents.<br />（2）I was very excited . I couldn’te express myself in words.<br />I was so excited that I couldn’t express myself in words.<br />（3）We will have a further discussion. We draw a final conclusion.<br />We will have a further discussion before we draw a final conclusion.<br />（4）The economy in this area is developing rapidly. The qualities of some citizens <br />are still not satisfactory.<br />Although the economy in this area is developing rapidly, the qualities of some citizens <br />are still not satisfactory. <br />（5）You are allowed to drive my car . You should drive carefully and slowly.<br />You are allowed to drive my car on condition that/ as long as you should drive <br />carefully and slowly.<br />［练习］<br />根据句子之间的关系，用正确的连词使其成为复合句。<br />（1）The teacher had read my composition. He gave me his opinion. <br />After the teacher had read my composition, he gave me his opinion. <br />（2）You have got the secret. Please don’t spread it in public. <br />If you have got the secret, please don’t spread it in public. <br />（3）They arrived at the farm. They were welcomed by the farmers. <br />The moment/As soon as they arrived at the farm, they were welcomed by the farmers. <br /> <br />（4）The International Red Cross is an organization. Its purpose is to help the sick <br />and the needy.<br />The International Red Cross is an organization whose purpose is to help the sick and <br />the needy.<br />（5）I decided to find a job. I could earn the money.<br />I decided to find a job so that I could earn the money.<br /> 二. 学会运用非谓语动词<br />用非谓语动词使你的句子简洁。<br />例：（1）Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa.<br />Most of the artists invited to the party were from South Africa.<br />（2）The prices of the computers which are being shown here are still unknown.<br />The prices of the computers being shown here are still unknown.<br />（3）After he had been deserted by his guide, he couldn’t find his way through the <br />jungle.<br />Having been deserted by his guide, he couldn’t find his way through the jungle.<br />（4）Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park in order that <br />they could keep healthy.<br />Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park to keep healthy.<br />（5）The church was built in 1829. It is the oldest European structure . <br />The church built in 1829 is the oldest European structure . <br />［练习］<br />运用非谓语动词完成下列句子：<br />（1）Jane was disturbed by the noise. She turned off the radio. <br />Disturbed by the noise, Jane turned off...
