2009年上海市 <br />考场真题 <br /> 以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br />样板文： <br />I want to do something for my school <br /> I want to do make my school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don’t think so. Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean.” But I have never done anything to make my school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make my school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make our school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple? <br /> <br />满分作文 <br />（一） <br /> I want to do something for my school <br />Now, I will leave my school. I have had much fun there. So I want to do something for my school. <br />First, I want to plant some trees to make my school magic and green. Then, I will share my studying experiences with my schoolmates. Finally, I want to thank my teachers, they help me a lot and I appreciate it very much. <br />I love my school very much, it is the best in my mind. I will do more things for my school in the future. <br />（二） <br /> I want to do something for my school <br />Now, I’ll leave my school, I want to do something for my school. <br />Well, I will try my best to protect the environment of our school. I’ll pick up the trash, I’m going to clean up our school, our school can be more beautiful. <br />There are many flowers in my home, I want to carry the most beautiful ones to our school, their sweet smell can make everyone in our school happy, at the same time the school yard can be more beautiful. <br />What I want to do is so much. In a word, I hope our school can be more and more beautiful. <br />（三） <br /> I want to do something for my school <br />School is the best place for me to study and it’s my second home. Every day we study with our teachers and classmates, we share happiness and sadness with each other. So I think each of us should do something for our school. <br />First, I think we should study hard to get good grades. Because teachers are always trying their best to teach us well. To reply to them, we should be the best. <br />Nest we should make our school more beautiful by protecting the environment in it. We shouldn’t throw litter here and there. If we see someone damage the environment, stop him at once. In this way we will have a better school, it’s good for our study. <br />Let’s do something for our school together to make it beautiful. <br />（四） <br /> I want to do...
