中考写作话题 1 <br />校园生活( School life) <br />重要性★★★★★ <br />时态 <br />1.Tom 的宠物狗已经死了 5 天了。( have been)(2017 宝山一模, 37） <br />_________________________________________________________________ <br />2.一下飞机，所有旅客就会被直接带到酒店。( as soon as)(2016 徐汇一模, 38) <br />_________________________________________________________________ <br />3. 因为我有事情要告诉他，我会等到他回来。( until)(2016 虹口一模, 35) <br />__________________________________________________________________ <br />4. 直到昨天在瑜伽俱乐部碰面，我才认识这位新同学。（not... until）(2016 奉贤二模, 42) <br />_________________________________________________________________ <br />5. 这个运动员正在跑 1500 米时，突然摔倒了。（while）(2016 松江二模, 38) <br />________________________________________________________________ <br />（考题关联） <br />◆2016 中考真题-- I’m ready <br />◆2014 中考真题-- This time next year <br />◆2017 浦东二模-- I want to be a/an in group work <br />◆2017 普陀二模-- Our last class meeting in junior high school <br />◆2016 宝山一模-- School uniforms <br />◆2016 嘉定一模-- How to celebrate graduation <br />◆2016 长宁、金山二模-- Students should not work too hard <br />◆2015 浦东一模-- I get from my class life <br />◆2015 崇明一模-- Changes in my school <br />◆2015 虹口一模-- My last winter holiday in junior middle school <br />◆2015 金山一模-- One problem/ question I met in my English study <br />◆2014 闵行一模-- A happy memory in my junior high school <br />◆2014 静安、青浦一模-- A suggestion letter to my dear school <br />◆2014 普陀二模-- The thing I’d like to do most after the entrance examination <br />（真题再现） <br />Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic"Changes in my school.(以《学校发生的变化》为题写一篇不 <br />少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) <br />Use the following points as a reference。(以下提示仅供参考) <br />What changes have taken place in your school? <br />What do you think of these changes? <br />(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) <br />(2015 崇明一模) <br />★审(Read)的：简开 <br />从作文标题“Changes in my school”中可得知，主要的写作内容应为校园的变化，再根据题干中所给提示： <br />1 .What changes have taken place in your school? 2. What do you think of these changes?可将书写方向定为：1. 校 <br />园发生的变化是？2. 我对这些变化的看法是...... 然而，写到这里，我们会发现题干中并没有之前所预想的第 <br />三点提示，在这种情况下，则要按照传统写作的三大段模式，自行附加结尾，即：3. 对校园生活进行总结提 <br />出期望。 <br />★写( Write) <br />根据之前所讲写作步骤：作文题目一写作框架一添加素材一初稿， <br />即可进行如下书写步骤的拆解： <br />作文题目 <br />① <br />② <br />③ <br />写作框架 <br />开篇 <br />中间 <br />结尾 <br />初稿 <br />素材 <br />1. What changes have taken place in your <br />school? <br />2. What do you think of these changes? <br />3. Conclusion. /Hope. <br />开篇：The changes have taken place in <br />my school are... <br />中间：I think the changes are... <br />结 尾 ： In conclusion./ I hope my <br />school... <br />接下来，我们需要思考，涉及到校园生活类话题时，可以应用多少词汇及句式，才会使文章的内容变得 <br />更加丰富。 <br />★可用素材★ <br />词汇大搜罗 <br />▲名词： <br />1. environment(495) 2. health(700) 3. knowledge(836) 4. life(868) <br />5. part(1087) 6. playground(1140) 7. rubbish(1295) 8....
