优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点06.申请信+读后续写+概要写作1假如你叫李华，今年18岁，是一名高二学生。你所在的城市明年要举办国际旅游节（theInternationalTourismFestival），现向全市招募志愿者，请你根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信，应征旅游节志愿者的工作。要点如下：1.你的个人信息；2.爱好旅游且已经参观过许多名胜古迹，了解城市的历史；3.擅长英语，所以对你而言和外国人交流很容易；4.乐意为自己的城市工作，如果有机会，会投身于工作。注意：词数100左右。【参考范文】Dearsirormadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.IreallyhopetobeavolunteerfortheInternationalTourismFestivalinourcity.IamLiHua,anoutgoingboyandI'm18yearsoldinSenior2.I'minterestedintravellingandhavevisitedmanyplacesofinterest.Ihaveagoodknowledgeofourcity'shistory.What'smore,Englishismyfavoritesubject.Ithinkitiseasyformetocommunicatewellwiththeforeigners.I'llbegladtoworkforourcityifIamgiventheopportunity.I'llbesurelydevotedtothejob,makingtheforeignersmorefamiliarwithourcity.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.,优点英语Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给国际旅游节的组委会写封申请信，应征旅游节志愿者的工作。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。要求：1.你的个人信息；2.爱好旅游且已经参观过许多名胜古迹，了解城市的历史；3.擅长英语，所以对你而言和外国人交流很容易；4.乐意为自己的城市工作，如果有机会，会投身于工作。第二步：列提纲hopetodo;outgoing;beinterestedin;placesofinterest;haveagoodknowledgeof;communicatewellwith;bedevotedto;befamiliarwith第三步：连词成句1.IreallyhopetobeavolunteerfortheInternationalTourismFestivalinourcity.2.IamLiHua,anoutgoingboyandI'm18yearsoldinSenior2.3.I'minterestedintravellingandhavevisitedmanyplacesofinterest.4.Ihaveagoodknowledgeofourcity'shistory.5.What'smore,Englishismyfavoritesubject.6.Ithinkitiseasyformetocommunicatewellwiththeforeigners.7.I'llbegladtoworkforourcityifIamgiventheopportunity.8.I'llbesurelydevotedtothejob,makingtheforeignersmorefamiliarwithourcity.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供参考)2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Inspiteof+n/doing(供参考),优点英语4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【范文点评】[高分句型1]Ithinkitiseasyformetocommunicatewellwiththeforeigners.(此句用到itis+adj.forsb.todosth.句型)[高分句型2]I'llbegladtoworkforourcityifIamgiventheopportunity.(if引导条件状语从句)[高分句型3]I'llbesurelydevotedtothejob,makingtheforeignersmorefamiliarwithourcity.(现在分词making作状语)2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwastheshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipateinsuchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledgedthatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.IwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostandinfrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?”Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwocompetitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas.“Justimagineyouareonthestageinthepresenceoftheaudience,”sheadded.“I’msorry,Ms.Sara,”Ireplied.“Ihaveabitofasorethroat.”ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticeinfrontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthebestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMrs.SaranottoworrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpracticemyscrip.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.Asthebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovaintopracticeandexpectedeverythingtobefine.Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,thehallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmyclassmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighth,优点英语contestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewhospokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.【参考范文】,优点英语Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.Facingthecrowd,Ifoundmyselfsufferingfromstagefright.IspokeinanexpressionlessvoiceandevenstutteredafewtimesasIforgotpartsofthestory.Mylegstrembledandsodidmyvoice.Onseeingmyterribleperformance,thejudgesshooktheirheads.Thesupportersfrommyschoollookedatmeindisappointment.Ihaveneverbeensoembarrassedinmylife.IntheendIwalkedoffthestage,myeyesfilledwithtears.Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.Ididnotwinanyprizes--notevenaconsolationone.Itwasnotsurprisingatall.IfeltashamedwhenIfacedmyclassmatesandofcourse,Ms.Sara.Iregrettedunderestimatingmyopponentsandoverestimatingmyself.Myvanityhadcostmethechampionship.Inowregrettedbeingsoarrogant.Ihadlearnedmylessonwellandfinallyunderstoodthemeaningofthetwosayings,“Pridegoesbeforeafall.”and“Practicemakesperfect!”【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了我狂妄自大地认为自己已经是演讲得最好的人了，甚至是老师在要求我练习的时候也总是找借口逃避。当我在看到其他参赛选手表现非常出色的时候，开始着急、担心了。最后通过自己的失败明白了骄兵必败和熟能生巧这些道理。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“很快，就该我上场了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在这次演讲比赛中的具体表现。②由第二段首句内容“最后，比赛结束后宣布了比赛结果。”可知，第二段可描写作者在听到结果后的心情以及领悟到的经验教训。2.续写线索：上场表演——场上表现——演讲结束——宣布结果——后悔羞愧——领悟感受3.词类激活行为类：①结结巴巴地说：stutter/speakwithoutfluency；②低估：underrate/underestimate；③后悔：regret/awaketoone'serrors情感类：①尴尬：embarrassed/awkward；②羞愧：ashamed/humiliating【范文点评】[高分句型1].Facingthecrowd,Ifoundmyselfsufferingfromstagefright.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）[高分句型2].IfeltashamedwhenIfacedmyclassmatesandofcourse,Ms.Sara.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）,优点英语3阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Anewstudywarnsthataboutthirtypercentoftheworld’speoplemaynothaveenoughwaterbytheyear2025.AprivateAmericanorganizationcalledPopulationActionInternational(PAI)didthenewstudy.Itsaysmorethan335millionpeoplelackenoughwaternow.Thepeoplelivein28countries.MostofthecountriesareinAfricaortheMiddleEast.PAIresearcherRobertEngelmansaysbytheyear2025,about3,000millionpeoplemaylackwater.Atleast18morecountriesareexpectedtohaveseverewaterproblems.Thedemandforwaterkeepsincreasing.YettheamountofwaterontheEarthstaysthesame.MrEngelmansaysthepopulationincountriesthatlackwaterisgrowingfasterthaninotherpartsoftheworld.Hesayspopulationgrowthinthesecountrieswillcontinuetoincrease.Thereportsayslackofwaterinthefuturemayresultinseveralproblems.Itmayincreasehealthproblems.Lackofwateroftenmeansdrinkingwaterisnotsafe.MrEngelmansaysthereareproblemsallovertheworldbecauseofdiseases,suchascholerawhicharecarriedinwater.Lackofwatermayalsoresultinmoreinternationalconflict.Countriesmayhavetocompeteforwaterinthefuture.Somecountriesnowgetsixtypercentoftheirfreshwaterfromothercountries.Andthereportsayslackofwaterwouldaffecttheabilitytoimprovetheireconomies.Thisisbecausenewindustriesoftenneedlargeamountsofwaterwhentheyarebeginning.ThePopulationActionInternationalstudygivesseveralsolutionstothewaterproblem.Oneway,itsays,istofindwaystousewaterformorethanonepurpose.Anotherwayistoteachpeopletobecarefulnottowastewater.Athirdwayistouselesswaterforagriculture.Thereportalsosayslong-termsolutionstothewaterproblemmustincludecontrolsonpopulationgrowth.,优点英语【参考范文】Anewstudyshowsthatabout30%oftheworld’speoplemaysufferashortageofwaterinthefollowingfewyears.(要点1)Nowadaysover335millionpeoplein28countrieslackenoughwater,whiletheamountofwaterremainsthesameandthepopulationisgrowingfaster.(要点2)Theshortageofwaterwillcausehealthproblemsandinternationalconflict.(要点3)Fortunately,waysarefoundtosettlethewaterproblem.(要点4)【解析】这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲述目前缺水现状以及缺水会带来的问题，最后提出解决缺水问题的方法。文章的主要结构采用了“提出问题，解析问题，解决问题”的论述方法，主要讲目前缺水现状以及缺水会带来的问题，最后提出解决缺水问题的方法。符合概要写作常规出题思路。第一段为总述，讲述现象：Anewstudywarnsthataboutthirtypercentoftheworld’speoplemaynothaveenoughwaterbytheyear2025.(一项新的研究警告说，到2025年，世界上大约30%的人可能没有足够的水。)提出了文章的话题：缺少。可以用到的词汇或句型有：aboutthirtypercentoftheworld’speople等。第二段至第四段详细阐述了缺水现状，其中第二段提及缺水人口数量，第三段提及与对水的需求增加相反的是水资源数量的不变性，第四段提及了人口增长。可以用到的词汇或句式有：itsaysmorethan335millionpeoplelackenoughwaternow;theamountofwaterontheEarthstaysthesame;populationgrowth等。第五段至第六段的主旨句为：Thereportsayslackofwaterinthefuturemayresultinseveralproblems.讲述了缺水带来的问题：健康问题，国际争端问题以及经济发展问题。可以用到的词汇或句式有：lackofwaterinthefuturemayresultinseveralproblems;increasehealthproblems；resultinmoreinternationalconflict;affecttheabilitytoimprovetheireconomies等。第七段主旨句为：ThePopulationActionInternationalstudygivesseveralsolutionstothewaterproblem.本段讲了专家们给出了许多解决办法，比如一水多用，不浪费水资源，减少农业用水，控制人口增长等。可以用到的词汇或句式有：severalsolutions等。【范文点评】高分句型1：Anewstudyshowsthatabout30%oftheworld’speoplemaysufferashortageofwaterinthefollowingfewyears.(一项新的研究表明，世界上大约30%的人将在未来几年遭受缺水。)本句中that引导宾语从句。高分句型2：Nowadaysover335millionpeoplein28countrieslackenoughwater,whiletheamountofwaterremainsthesameandthepopulationisgrowingfaster.(现在28个国家有超过3.35亿人缺水，而水的数量保持不变，人口增长更快。)本句中“while”可为并列连词，表对比关系。
