湖南省2022年上学期娄底市双峰一中高三英语第一次月考试题答案21-23CCB24-27ADCA28-31DDCA32-35ADCB36-40DECAF41-45DBADD46-50ACBAD51-55BCADC第一节originally57.tomove58.against59.its60.wasappointed61.a62.scientists63.Since64.whom65.Respected第四部分写作第一节【审题破题】本题要求给一位在中国求学并遇到困难的外国交换生回帖。根据提示,文章要有以下几方面的内容:表示对他的情况的理解,鼓励他坚持下去,帮助他学习汉语等。写作人称以第一人称和第二人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。【参考范文】DearKenton,Iamsorrytohearyouhavesomedifficultieswithlifeandcommunicationinourcountry,butI'mwillingtohelpyououtoftrouble.Totellyouthetruth,itisnaturalthatyouaremissingyourparentsandwanttogohome.Butpersonally,Idon'tthinkwecanlivewithourparentsallourlife.Thus,itisagoodchanceforyoutobemoreindependent.Youcancallyourparentsmoreofteninsteadofgivingupyourstudy.Ifyoudon’tmind,Iwouldliketobeyourfriend.Wecanchatonlinefrequently,whichwillimproveyourChinesealot.Onlybycommunicatingwithotherscanyouovercomeyourdifficulties.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.YourssincerelyLiHua3/3\n【名师点评】文章开头用并列句引出主题,简单明了。第二、三段分别用Totellyouthetruth和Ifyoudon'tmind引出内容,言语间充满了真挚的感情。第三段用倒装句Onlybycommunicatingwithothers...difficulties收尾,在结构上使文章的精彩之处得以升华。此外,文章运用了大量的亮点词语(如bewillingto,independent,insteadof,overcome等)和高级句式(如主语从句thatyouaremissingyourparentsandwanttogohome,非限制性定语从句whichwillimproveyourChinesealot,倒装句Onlybycommunicatingwithotherscanyouovercomeyourdifficulties等)。第二节【短文大意】过新年那天,看到一家人冒雨在等车,作者的爸爸好心邀请他们到家中避雨。【写作指导】Paragraph1的开头是"这个男人想了一会,但是拒绝了",再结合第二段的开头可知,最终他们答应了爸爸的邀请,故第一段应该主要描述作者一家人如何劝说那家人同意来家中避雨以及他们上车后的情形。Paragraph2的开头是“当我们到家下车时,三个孩子高兴地从前门跑进去”,显然接下来的内容应该是描述他们来到家中,我们给予他们帮助,以及父亲后来又开车将他们送回等车处的情形,还可以适当升华一下主题,揭示“我”对这件事的感悟。Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Themanthoughtaboutitforamoment,butthenrefused.Hesaidhedidn'twanttoputustoanybother.Myfatherexplainedthattherainwouldlastlongandourhousewasnearthestation.Aftermyparents'strongpersuasion,hefinallyagreedandthankedusallthetime.Theyclimbedintothecar.Theyhadnoluggage,;onlytheclothestheywerewearing.Oncetheysettledin,myfatherlookedbackoverhisshoulderhandingthemsometissuestowipetherainwaterfromtheirfaces.Paragraph2:Whenwegotoutofthecaratourhouse,thethreechildrenranthroughthefrontdoorhappily.Mymothernoticedalltheirclotheswerewet,soshefoundsomeofoursforthemtochange.JillandIdecidedtoshareourNewYearpresentswiththechildren.OneofthegirlschoseJill’sdollandimmediatelyhuggedittoherbreast.Whentherainstopped,myfatherdrovethemtothestation.Aswedroveaway,IwatchedoutthewindowaslongasIcould,lookingbackattheirhappyfaces.ThatwasthedaywhenJillandIlearnedthejoyofmaking3/3\nothershappy.3/3