GrammarandWritingLearntowriteandwritetolearn——TheSimplePastTense,LearningaimsReviewthegrammarBewillingtotalkaboutyourpaststoriesbyusingtherightsimplepasttense.Learntowriteadescriptionofajourneybyusingwhatwehavelearnt.,FreetalkaboutyournationalholidayIwould…whenIwasaprimaryschoolstudent.Iwould…whenIwasachild.,Igotupat_____duringtheholiday?Iusuallygetupat______atschool?Youusedtogetupat…butnowyouhavetogetup….Freetalkaboutyournationalholiday,Doyoustillrememberwhatyoudidthreedaysago?Doyourememberwhatyoudidtheotherdayorafewdaysago?I…threedaysago.I…theotherday/afewdaysago.Iremembertheday……Irememberdoing…Iwillneverforgetmyfirstvisitto…,ConcludetherulesofthesimplepasttenseIgotupat9o’clockduringthenationalholiday.ButIusuallygetupat6:20o’clockatwork.Iusedtogetupat7o’clock.IspentmostofthetimesleepingduringthenationalholidaybecauseIwassoexhausted.Iusedtodomyhomeworkanddosomereadingduringtheholiday.WhenIwasyoung,Iwouldvisitmyrelativeswithmyparents.IwenttobeabridesmaidofmyfriendonOct.2nd.IreceivedasurprisingcallingfromoneofmyoldfriendsinAmericatheotherday.Conclude:thepasttenseisusedfor_________________________.Thetimeexpressionsusuallyare…thepastactionsorexistedstateusedto+V./would+V.,PastTenseTimeExpressions1.常用的表示过去的时间状语有:recently,theotherday,duringtheday,onenight,alongtimeago,untilthe1920s,in1925,formanyyears,justnow,atthattime,duringhismiddleschoolyears,then,lastnight,intheolddays…,1.—Whataboutyourself-drivetripyesterday?—Tiring!Theroadisbeingwidened,andwe_______aroughride.hadB.haveC.wouldhaveD.havehad2.I’mcallingabouttheapartmentyou___theotherday.Couldyoutellmemoreaboutit?advertisedB.hadadvertisedC.areadvertisingD.willadvertise3.Iwasoutoftownatthattime,soIdon’tknowexactlyhowit____.A.washappeningB.happenedC.happensD.hashappenedPractice(选自《世纪金榜》),4.Scientistshavemanytheoriesabouthowtheuniverse_____intobeing.cameB.wascomingC.hadcomeD.wouldcome5.—Wherehaveyoubeenrecently?—I_______toHangzhouonbusinessforaweeklastmonth.A.havebeenB.wentC.hadbeenD.hadgone,Stage2:WritingTheremanythings,interesting,exciting,unforgettable,unusual,happenedonthisjourney.Lifeisajourney.MyfirsttrainrideThebestjourneyofmylifeMyunforgettablefamilyholidayThemostunusualjourneyI’vemadeThemosthappyjourneyTip1.Chooseorwriteasuitabletitle.,Writingskillstense:StylisticfeatureA.narration(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argument(议论文)D.essay(散文)Tip2.Makesuretherighttenseandstylisticfeature.,StructurePart1:Briefintroductionaboutyourjourney/holidaywhowhatwhenwherewhyHowThemeansofvehicle;howisyourfeeling,para1briefintroductionaboutthetripwho_______________andher_______when_______________what_______________________________whereFrom_________to____________;_______________kilometresawayhowBytrainAliceThompsonfriendrecentlyhadarideonalong-distancetrainSydneyAliceSpringsmorethan4000Whataride!,StructurePart1:Briefintroductionaboutyourjourney/holidaywhoMycolleaguesandIwhatwenttoHongKongwhenthissummervacationwhereChongqingtoShenzhentoHongKongwhytoreceivetrainingHowplane/subway;excitedTip3.Thebasicelements“5Wsand1H”.,thesceneryonthewayPart2Part2Part2:ThebodyPart(1or2paragraphs)Traveliswhatwesee,hear,doandlearnontheway.,somearehappy,someareunhappychildhoodmemoriesonP26thefirstvisittothezoolearntorideabicyclethefirstdayatkindergartenlearntoswim.thefirstvisittothecinemasomethingimpressedus,12345timeMyfirstvisitMyfirstcyclingVerylittleplacekindergartenpersonsIOthersandIthezooMyfatherandIChildhoodAboyandIAswimmingpoolMycousinandIFouryearsoldcinemaWhattodoLearnedtorideabikeresultIwasfrightenedandcriedIstoppedfeelingnervousSawalionandaneagleI’mmuchasterthanmyfathernowPlayedwithsometoysLearnedtoswimIwasOlympicstandardWatchedacartoonItwaswonderful,Part2:ThebodyPart(1or2paragraphs)Traveliswhatwesee,hear,doandlearnontheway.WhatyousawWhatyoudidWhathappenedWhatyoulearntTip4.Focusonthesceneryorastory,Howcanweexpressourfeelings?Module3Module2Module1wonderful,great,comfortable,nice,Thestarsshonelikediamonds.amusing,energetic,serious,relaxing/relaxedenthusiastic,brilliant,embarrassing/embarrassed,disappointing/disappointedimpressiveTip5.adj.orsimile,Part2ConnectionsPara1Para2Howcanweconnectthemandmaketheminorder?Tip6.connectionsorconjunctionsForthefirstfewhundredkilometersofthejourney，Afterthat,Suddenly,DuringthedayOnenight,ataboutmidnight,Part3:TheendingTip7.Makeasimpleconclusionandbeclosetoyourtitle1.beattracted/movedbythebeauty/view,2.neverforgetourtripto/thisunusualexperience…3.leaveanunforgettableimpressiononsb.4.haveapositiveeffecton,haveagoodtime,enjoyoneself...5.ourtripto...isunforgettable,structure全文按总——分——总结构安排。conclusion,Tip4.FocusonthesceneryorastoryTip1.Chooseorwriteasuitabletitle.Tip2.Makesuretherighttenseandstylisticfeature.Tip3.Thebasicelements“5Wsand1H”.Tip5.adj.orsimileTip6.connectionsorconjunctionsTip7.MakeasimpleconclusionandbeclosetoyourtitleTip8.self-checkandaskforhelpConclusion,AppreciateacompositionThissummervacation,mynewcolleaguesandIwenttoHongKongtoreceivetrainingofbeingamodernteacher.IwasexcitedbecauseitwassuchachanceonceinabluemoonthatIcouldbroadenmyeyes.WeflewtoShenZhenfirst,thenwewalkedtotheborderofHongKong.Afterthat,wetookasubwaytothedowntownHongKong.TheMostUnusualJourneyIHaveMade,HongKongwasafantasticcity.Thetransportationworkedwell.Althoughthestreetwasverynarrow,therewasseldomtrafficjam.Theenvironmentwasveryclean.Youcouldhardlyfindanylittersonthestreet.WhenIgotonthedouble-deckerbus,owe,itwasawesome.Theroomwasverybig.Thereweremanyseatsandyouneedn’tstand.,Wespent4dayslisteningtoMr.Qiu’slecture.Hewasanamusingandintelligentman.IneversleptinhisclasseventhoughIfeltsleepy.Inthemorningandevening,wehadclassesabouthowtobeanexcellentteacher,howtobeagoodteammember.Intheafternoon,heshowedusaroundHongKong.WevisitedHongKongUniversity,HongKongUniversityofScienceandTechnologyandTaiPingMountainwherewehadagoodviewofthesunset.Thesunlookedlikeadeliciousbigfriedcake.
