优点英语2020-2021学年高二英语热点写作提升专练(通用版)热点07.倡议书+读后续写+概要写作1.为了配合学校开展垃圾分类工作，学生会向全校学生发出了“垃圾分类，从我做起”倡议。假如你是学生会主席李华，请你用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括：1.垃圾分类的做法；2.垃圾分类的意义；3.呼吁全体学生参加。注意:词数150左右。参考词汇垃圾分类rubbishclassificationDearfellowstudents，LiHua【参考范文】Dearfellowstudents，Asweproducealotofrubbish,suchasleftoverfood,wastepaper,plasticbottlesandbatterieseveryday,ithasbecomeabigheadacheinourcampus.Ourschoolhaslaunchedaprogramofrubbishclassification.Weareappealingtoyoutoactivelyparticipateinit.Differentkindsofgarbagearerequiredtobesortedoutandplacedindifferentdustbins.Papercanberecycled,whileleftoverscanbecollectedasfoodforpigs.Aboveall,harmfulthingslikeplasticsandusedbatteriesmustn’tbemixedwithotherwastes.Theprogramisofgreatbenefit.Firstly,rubbishclassificationcanreducetheamountofrubbishandtherubbishpollutiontotheenvironment.What’smore,wewillbeabletosaveresourcesbymakinguseofrecyclable,优点英语garbageafterspecialtreatment,whichwilldogoodtoourenvironmentalprotection.Itisourresponsibilitytoworktogetherforabettercampus.Ifwetakeactionnow,wecanmakeabigdifference!LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封倡议书，呼吁全校学生“垃圾分类，从我做起”。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时、现在完成时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.垃圾分类的做法；2.垃圾分类的意义；3.呼吁全体学生参加。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）alotof;leftoverfood;abigheadache;campus;rubbishclassification;appealto;activelyparticipatein;differentkindsof;berecycled;harmful;beofgreatbenefit;reduce;pollution;beableto;garbage;dogoodto;responsibility;makeabigdifference第三步：连词成句1.Asweproducealotofrubbish,suchasleftoverfood,wastepaper,plasticbottlesandbatterieseveryday,ithasbecomeabigheadacheinourcampus.2.Ourschoolhaslaunchedaprogramofrubbishclassification.3.Weareappealingtoyoutoactivelyparticipateinit.4.Differentkindsofgarbagearerequiredtobesortedoutandplacedindifferentdustbins.5.Papercanberecycled,whileleftoverscanbecollectedasfoodforpigs.6.Aboveall,harmfulthingslikeplasticsandusedbatteriesmustn’tbemixedwithotherwastes.7.Theprogramisofgreatbenefit.8.Firstly,rubbishclassificationcanreducetheamountofrubbishandtherubbishpollutiontotheenvironment.9.What’smore,wewillbeabletosaveresourcesbymakinguseofrecyclablegarbageafterspecialtreatment,,优点英语whichwilldogoodtoourenvironmentalprotection.10.Itisourresponsibilitytoworktogetherforabettercampus.11.Ifwetakeactionnow,wecanmakeabigdifference!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【范文点评】[高分句型1]Asweproducealotofrubbish,suchasleftoverfood,wastepaper,plasticbottlesandbatterieseveryday,ithasbecomeabigheadacheinourcampus.(运用了as引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2]What’smore,wewillbeabletosaveresourcesbymakinguseofrecyclablegarbageafterspecialtreatment,whichwilldogoodtoourenvironmentalprotection.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)2.阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落的开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Whenshewastwelveyearsold,RahaearnedascholarshiptostudyataboardingschoolinEngland.HerfathertoldhertostudyhardandpracticerunningeverydayinEngland.Shenoddedbecausethatismucheasierthanstayinghappyinacompletelynewcountry.Severaldayslater,shekissedherfamilyandboardedtheplaneforEngland.Astheplanetookoff,shelookedoutofthewindowatthegoatsandbrownriversofKenya.Shestareddownatthegreenfieldswheresheusedtorunlikethewind,barefoot(赤脚的).AtschoolinEngland,Rahahadlotsofmathproblemstosolve,essaystowrite,andbookstoread.Shealsojoinedintheschoolrunningteam.Theywerepreparingforanimportantrunningrace,inwhichrunnersfromdifferentschoolstookpart.Inordertopracticerunning,hercoachgaveherastripedshirt,whiteshorts,shoeswithcleats(防滑钉)andanotherpairwithspongysoles(吸水鞋底)forcross-country.Honestlyspeaking,shehadalwaysrunbarefootathome,sotheshoesfelttight(紧的).ButalltheotherrunnersworeshoesandRahadidn’twanttobedifferent.Theteampracticedeveryweekdayafternoon.OnSaturdays,everyonewatchedfootball——everyonebutRaha.Shewouldrunaloneonthecountryroadsbarefootandrunoverfieldsthickwithmudjustasinherhometown.Eachdayatlunch,shewouldsitaloneinthelargedininghall,eatingdishestotallystrangetoherand,优点英语missingherfamily.OneSaturday,Raharanupahillandfoundherselfinabarnyard(谷仓前的空场地).Tohersurprise,oneofherclassmates,Thomas,stoodjustinsidethebamdoors.Afterhegreetedher,Rahaasked,“Whyaren’tyouwatchingfootball“Ihavetohelpmyfather,”saidThomas,“butwhyaren’tyouwearingyourshoes?”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Onhearingthisquestion,Rahafeltawkward.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onthedayoftherace,alltherunnerswerewearingprofessionalsuitandshoesexceptRaha.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Onhearingthisquestion,Rahafeltawkward.However,shecollectedhercouragetotellhimthetruth."Youareusedtorunningbarefoot?That'samazing."saidThomas,"Buteverybodyhashiswaytodosomething,sojustruninyourownway."Thenheexpressedhisadmirationandsupporttoher.RahawasmovedtotearstheinstantsheheardwhatThomassaid.Shealsofeltwarmandencouraged.Fromthenon,shedevotedherselftopracticingrunningeveryday,barefoot.Onthedayoftherace,alltherunnerswerewearingprofessionalsuitsandshoes,exceptRaha.Shestoodonthelane,barefoot.However,shewasnotfeelingashamedbecausethatwasherwaytorun."Comeon,Raha,youcanmakeit!"ItwasThomaswhowascheeringforher.Suddenly,shefeltmoreconfident.Atlast,shewonthefirstprizeandbroughthonortoherschool.Fromthenon,shecouldnotonlyconcentrateonstudyingandrunning,butshealsostayedhappyinthenewschool.【解析】,优点英语本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了12岁的Raha在英国一所寄宿制学校学习。在学校，她有很多数学问题要解决，有论文要写，书要读。她也加入了学校跑步队，但Raha喜欢光着脚练习跑步。一天跑步时，Raha遇到了Thomas,Thomas问她为何光着脚跑步。1.段落续写：①根据第一段首句内容“听到这个问题，Raha觉得很尴尬”可知，第一段可描写Raha向Thomas解释自己光着脚跑步的原因，并得到了对方的鼓励。②根据第二段首句内容“比赛当天，除了Raha，所有的赛跑者都穿着职业套装和鞋子”可知，第二段可描写Raha在Thomas的鼓励下，跑步赢得了第一名，也获得了自信。2.续写线索：Raha解释光脚跑步的原因——Thomas对她表示支持——Raha感动——参加比赛——赢得比赛——获得快乐3.词汇激活行为类：①解释：tellhimthetruth/explain/accountfor；②表示钦佩：expressone'sadmiration/professone'sadmiration情绪类①感动：bemovedtotears/toomovedtoutteraword；②受到鼓舞：feelencouraged/feelinspired；③开心：happy/glad/ontopoftheworld/indescribablywildjoy/canhardlyconcealone'sexcitement【范文点评】[高分句型1]RahawasmovedtotearstheinstantsheheardwhatThomassaid.(theinstant引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]However,shewasnotfeelingashamedbecausethatwasherwaytorun.（because引导原因状语从句）[高分句型3]ItwasThomaswhowascheeringforher.（Itwas…who强调句型）3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Readingabookandwatchingafilmaretwoverydifferentexperiences,butit’snormaltohavehighexpectationswhenafilmofafavouritebookismade.ThereareverymanytimesIhavebeendisappointedbyafilmofabookIlove.Thefilmscanbeadaptedfromclassicnovels,shortstories,comicbooksandstageplays,aswellasnon-fictions,eventhosewrittenbyghostwriters.Allcanworkwell,butwhydomanyadaptationsfailwithbothcinemaaudiencesandcritics?Akeyquestionisobviouslyhowclosetotheoriginalthefilmis.Sinceatypicalfilmisonlyaroundtwohourslong,itbecomesaquestionforthescreenwriterstodecidewhattoleaveoutandhowtowritethedialogue.,优点英语Sometimestheremaybechangestotheplot,additions,andevendifferentendings.I,likemanypeople,haveoftenleftthecinemafeeling“thefilmisnotlikethebook”.Anotherproblemisthecast.Findingactorsacceptabletofilmaudiencescanmeanthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Readershavetheirimaginationsabouthowcharacterslookandsound.ThisiswhereIthinkmanyfilmadaptationsfalldown.Somebooksarejusttoodifficulttofilmfortechnicalreasons,althoughmovieslikeTheLifeofPiareverysuccessful.CGI(ComputerGeneratedImage)technologyhashadahugeimpactonthemovieindustry.Itallowedthepreviouslyunfilmabletobecomeareality.Onemaythinkthatitisthebookwriterwhoisinthebestpositiontodofilmadaptations.Infact,thiscanactuallybeabadthingbecausetheymaybetooclosetothematerialandfinditdifficulttoadapt.Also,somewritershavebeenveryunsatisfiedwiththefilmversionsoftheirwork.RoaldDahlandStephenKingareexamplesofthis.Forme,anyway,itisalwaysabadideatowatchafilmofabookyoulove._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】参考范文1:Manyadaptationsfailwithpeoplefordifferentreasons.（要点1）Thekeyoneisthatthefilmisnotliketheoriginalastheremaybemanychangesbecauseofthelimitedtime.（要点2）Besides,readershavetheirownimaginationaboutthecast.（要点3）Andit’sreallyhardworktofilmsomebooksfortechnologylimit.（要点4）Additionally,thebookauthorisnotthebestchoiceforadaptationbecauseoftheirverycloseconnectiontothematerial.（要点5）（78words）参考范文2:Manyadaptationsdisappointbothaudiencesandreaders,whichmayarisesfromthereasonsbelow.（要点1）Firstly,tomeettimerequirement,theadaptedfilmisalwaysfoundnotclosetotheoriginalstory.（要点2）Besides,theselectedcastmaynotsatisfyreadersastheyhavetheirownimaginationaboutthecharacters.（要点3）,优点英语Andsomebooksarereallyunfilmablefortechnologylimit.（要点4）Asfortheadaptor,thebookauthor,beingtooclosetothematerial,shouldnotbetakenintofavorableconsideration.（要点5）（77words）【解析】本文以原版小说与电影改编为话题的评论性议论文。表达了作者对很多改编电影的失望之情，首段提出论点，第2到4段并列从电影与原著的忠实程度、演员的选择、电脑特技的运用和原著作者的态度四个角度论证，最后总结论点。第1段导入话题，表明看法，提出问题。关键词adaptation第2段结构总-分，首句明确失败关键点在于忠诚度。接下来摆事实、讲道理。关键词original第3段结构总-分，首句点明关键词cast,并指出它对改编成果的影响。造成这一结果的原因是书迷心中对角色外貌和声音有预期。第4段关键词technology，电影的拍摄仍受技术的限制第5段关键词writer或author提出原著作者不是明智的选择，接着从两个角度陈述。最后简单总结全文。
