优点英语读后续写：人与动物类Part1：经典例文（小狗救人）1Part2：人与动物故事构造套路3套路一：可爱型动物故事情节3套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节6套路三、主题升华句8Part3：人与动物场景素材积累8Part4：灵活应用11例1：人与麻雀11Part5：高考真题再现13真题1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】13真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】16从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar,优点英语bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。Part1：经典例文（小狗救人）Justasmanyfamiliesdoatapoint,Catherinechosetoaddanewfamilymemberbyadoptingapet.ShortlyafterherdaughterKate’sbirth,CatherinedecidedshewantedaclosebondwithadogforKate.Thus,Catherinecalledthedogshelterclosebytoinquireaboutadoption.Afterhearingabouttheavailableanimals,shechoseaDobermanPinscher.Oncetheysignedadoptionpapers,theynamedthedogKhan.Catherinewashopefulthiswouldprovidevaluablelessonsforherbaby,suchassharing,learningtoloveandresponsibilitytocareforanimals.Shewaslookingforwardtohavingthedogjointhefamily.HearingofKhan’sroughbackground,Catherineimmediatelylovedthedog.Shewasoverjoyedtobringthisspecialdogbacktoherfamily.Ofcourse,sherealizedtherewererisksinvolved.Well,theobviousrisksfrombringingalarge,potentiallydangerousanimaltoheryoungbaby,Catherinepushedthemaside.IfshehadnotadoptedKhan,hewouldhavebeenkilledjustaweeklater.So,thiswashisnewlifeandsecondchance,andthefamilywashopingforthebest.Everythingbegansmoothly.TheytrainedKhanduringthefirstfewdays.However,everythingchangedonthatfourthdaywhenthedogactedcompletelyoutofcharacter.Thefatefuldaybeganwiththeusualplaytimeintheyard.AlthoughbabyKatehadherparentswatchingfromadistance,theydidnotnoticeanythingoutoftheordinary.Kateandthenewdoghadbeenmakingahabitofplayingoutbacklikethis.However,thingsweredifferentthisday.Sowhatwasactuallyhappeningoutthere?Thetwowerenotbeingloudorcrazy.Theybeganrunningthroughthebackyardgrasstogether.Again,Catherinewatchedthetwoclosely.Surprisingly,thingshadchangedwithinaninstant!,优点英语注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Khanbeganactingwildlyallofasudden,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Obviously,itwasKhanwhosavedherbabybuthebarkedweaklyandthenfelldownwithdyingeyes.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Khanbeganactingwildlyallofasudden.Withhermouthwideopen,CatherinewatchedKhandraggingherchild,hopinghewouldstop.Justasshewaswonderinghowhecouldsuddenlybecomethisway,KhanputdownKateoutsidetheyard.CatherinerushedtoKateandcarriedhertosafetywhileKhanbarkedtowardstheyardwildly.Catherinereturned,onlytofindapoisonoussnakecrawlingintheyardandshedroveitaway.可汗突然开始疯狂地表演起来。凯瑟琳张开嘴，看着汗拖着她的孩子，希望他能停下来。就在她想知道他怎么会突然变成这样的时候，汗把凯特放在院子外面。凯瑟琳冲到凯特身边，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗则疯狂地向院子走去。凯瑟琳回来了，结果发现一条毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它开走了。,优点英语Obviously,itwasKhanwhosavedherbabybuthebarkedweaklyandthencollapsedwithdyingeyes.KhanprotectedKatefromthepoisonouscreatureandwasattacked.Althoughlivingwiththefamilyformerelyfourdays,hebecametheprotectorasCatherinehadhoped.CatherinerushedKhantothevet.“MayGodblessyou”,Catherinemurmured.Thevettriedhisbesttosavehim.Eventually,hemadeitandCatherineshedatearofrelief.显然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠声很微弱，然后瘫倒了，眼睛垂死了。可汗保护凯特不受有毒生物的伤害，并遭到了袭击。虽然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他还是像凯瑟琳所希望的那样成为了保护者。凯瑟琳冲着可汗去看兽医。“愿上帝保佑你。”凯瑟琳喃喃地说。兽医尽力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凯瑟琳如释了一口气。Part2：人与动物故事构造两大故事套路套路一：可爱型动物故事情节可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。1、外貌1.apairoflargewateryeyes一双水汪汪的大眼睛2.twobigroundeyes两只圆溜溜的大眼睛3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的眼睛4.anoselikeasmallblackgem一颗黑宝石般的鼻子5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿6.furisaswhiteassnow皮毛像雪一样洁白,优点英语7.alonglittletail一条长长的小尾巴2、动作wagthetail摇尾巴smell/sniff嗅bark/yap/yelp狗吠lick舔puttheearsup把耳朵竖起来shakethewholebody抖动全身bitethecornerofthecoat咬住衣角rubtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部holdittightlywiththepaws用爪子紧紧按住fallonitsback摔得四脚朝天runaroundme围着我跑keepscratchingyouwithhisfrontpaws用前爪不停挠你raiseitswholebodyonitshindlegs用后腿支起全身leaptoitsfeet跳起来restthenoseinitspaws把鼻子搁在爪子里keepitsforelegsdoubledup保持前腿弯曲3、高兴1.TheyweregladtoseePoppycoming backtoherusualself,优点英语（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）1.Smilingeversobright（笑得更加灿烂。）,hecalledouttohis parents,whotuggedhiminforalong hug.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（轻松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3、常见动物鹿：1.Amotherdeerwithahugepairofdeerhorns（有一对大的鹿角）appearedinfrontofhim,withababyfawn(幼鹿)lyingonthedryground.（202103宁波十校）2.Thepoorcreature,apparentlyindesperateneedofwater,lickeditupquicklywithitsshell-pinktongue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）3.Themotherdeerloweredherheadandlickedmyboy’scheekgently,asifexpressinggratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）.（202103宁波十校）马：1.Atthepen,Ginasawthehorse.Itwasofmediumsize.Ithadafine,softblackcoatandonewhitefoot（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）.Therewasawidewhitepatch(斑纹)thatrandownthecenterofitsface.Ginafellinlovewithitatfirstsight.“Wow!Whatahorse.”（英语周报高三第十期2020.9.4）2.Thehorseseemedtofeelherkindness,sniffingher（闻了闻她）.（英语周报高三第十期2020.9.4）狗：,优点英语1.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself（不像往常那么快乐）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Poppy approachedwithcaution,tryingnottoscarethepuppy.Sureenough,itwasonlymomentslaterthattheballoffurlifteditsheadoutofthe box（把它的头伸出盒子）topeekatitsnewhomeanditsnewfriend.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4.Hearinghisbagsunloadedonthedriveway,Poppy’searsprickedup（竖起耳朵）andsuddenlyshewasonallfours（四脚着地）.The boywasgreetedwitha cheerful high-pitchedbark.ThenthefrontdoorpoppedopenandPoppydartedtohisembrace,followedbythelittleonewholickedhisfingersfondly.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。1、害怕1.Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）4.Anumbingchillgrippedme（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）,优点英语1.Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（几乎给吓死）（2017年6月高考浙江卷）2.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）,mypalmssweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）2、求助与获救1.Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（疯狂地挥手）,screaming,“Help!”（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（惊奇地发现）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.Havingpulledthemassivebodyoutofthestump,Briancleanedthewounds（清洁伤口）andthengavehimcarefultreatment.Beckykneltdownandtendedtothewolf（蹲下来照顾狼）togetherwithBrian.（2020.11金华十校）4.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.（山东模拟）5.Usingarockasthesupportingpoint,Iunlockedthechainandsetthewolffree（放走这只狼）.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）3、熊：1.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegs（用他的后腿站起来）andpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.Thebearrearedup,attackedthefenceandevendesiredtoteardownus（想要撕裂我们）,优点英语withflamesblazinginitseyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）owingtothedreadfulspray.（2020.7高考浙江卷）4.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）5.OneofMac’sfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Satisfiedwithwhathegot（对他得到的很满意）,thewolfranintothewoods.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）4、狼：1.Pale-yelloweyesnarrowed.Blacklipstightened.Doublesetsoftwo-inchsharpteethwereexposed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）.Suddenlythewolftrembled.Itsteethclacked,andapainfulcryrosefromitsthroat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金华十校）2.Thewolf’sheadsanktotheground,sadyelloweyeslookingatus（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着我们）.（2020.11金华十校）3.Soangrywasthewolfthatitkeptroaring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮）andsmackingthewindowviolently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）套路三：主题升华设计可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。1.ElliandIlearnedourlesson（学到一个教训）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion,优点英语（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Therainthatcamethatdaywasamiracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）,savingourfarm,justlikemyboysavedalife.（202103宁波十校）4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表达感谢）.Whatawarmscene!（2020.11金华十校）Part3：人与动物场景素材积累(01)Paragraph1: Harryturnedandranfromthepond. “Waitforme!Itwon’tbelong,”heexclaimedtome.Desperateandhopeless,Iclosedmyeyes,prayingthiswasalladream.Andevenworse,thewaterwassocolditfeltlikemillionsofneedleswerestabbingme.HowIwishedthatIcouldflyoutofthe icy waterlikeabird! Afterwhatseemedtobeages, Harry returnedtothe pond,withalongoakbranchinhishand.AsIgrabbedholdofoneendofthebranch,mybrotherstartedto drag theotherwitheverylastounceofhisstrength.Thankgoodness,Iwasableto climb outoftheiceholeandthenwegallopedhome. Paragraph2: ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover. “Oh,my God!Where have you been?”shesaidinsurprise. “You'recompletelywet.”“It’sHarry’sfault!”Icomplainedtoherthroughmychatteringteeth.WhenItoldherwhathadhappenedtome,hereyeswerewidewithhorror.Allofa sudden,shetookmyarm,pulledmeintothebathroomandthengavemeawarmbath.Afterthat,mumdressedmeinawarm coat,wrappedmeinablanketandpouredmeacupofhotmilk.Shesatnexttome,smiling,relievedthatIwasallright.Sureenough,mybrotherwas criticized bymumforhislackofsafetyawareness.,优点英语(02)Paragraph1：Samarrivedveryearlythenextmorning.HerangthedoorbellandpolitelywaitedforMrs.Proudfoottoanswer.ThenhecouldhearRolandbarkingandwhininginside,frantictogetout.Samstoodbythedoor,debatingwithhimselfwhethertowalktheunfriendlydogtohelphisbestfriend.Afterawhile,thedoorflungopenandMrs.Proudfootcameout,greetinghimwithabeamingsmile.Surprisingly,thelazydoggrinnedupathimandwaggedhistail,eagertogooutwithhim.Mrs.Proudfootputaleashonthedog,strokedhisglossyheadandsaid,“Haveagoodtime,dear!”Withoutsayinggoodbye,Samandthedogdancedaroundandthendashedoutofthehouse.Paragraph2：Amonthlater,Mrs.ProudfootwasdelightedtofindRolandfitandenergetic.Obviously,Sam’seffortspaidoff—Rolandwashealthyandactive.ButwhatpleasedhermostwasthatSam,togetherwiththeotherkids,wouldstaywithheronweekends,chattingandlaughing.Besides,theywouldhelphercleanuptheyard.Fromthenon,laughterfilledherhouseandshenolongerfeltlonely.ThencamethemomentSamhadbeenlookingforwardto—thedayhewaspaidforhiswork.Whatabigsurprise!TearsofgratitudewelledupinBarry’seyesasheknewwhatSamhaddoneforhim.Samjuststoodthere,smiling,gladthathecouldwholeheartedlysupporthisfriendwhenhewasintrouble.(03)Paragraph1:Allofasudden,Bettyfeltsomethingtouchingthebottomofherfoot.Whatwasthat?Shewondered.Aseafish?Beforeshecouldgetonthesurfboard,itbumpedherinthefootonceagain.Shesuddenlyhadthefeelingthatanenormousfish,biggerthanher,wascirclingaroundher.AchillfeelingcreptupherspineasshethoughtofthejokeUncleMarkplayedonher.AndthenBettysawit:agraytrianglefinstickingupthroughthewater,headingrightforher.Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.Forasplitsecond,herheartpracticallyskippedabeat.,优点英语Paragraph2:“Help!Help!”Bettyscreamedinhorror.Hearingtheterriblescreamforhelp,UncleMarkinstantlyrealizedthatsomethingbadwashappening.Withoutthinking,heswamasquicklyashecouldtowardsBettyandyelled,“Getout!...”ButBettyseemedstuck,tooscaredtomove.Attheverymoment,theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofrazor-sharpteeth.Withallhismight,UncleMarkstabbeditinthemouthwithhissurfboard,scaringthemonsteraway.AndthenhegrabbedholdofBetty’sarmanddraggedhertothebeach.Allthistookonlyafewminutes,butBettywouldneverforgetthefrighteningexperience.(04)Paragraph1: Hewassentencedtobetornbyalioninthepublicarena(竞技场). Theterrifyingdayfinallyarrived.Allthepeopleinthecitywenttheretoseethebrutalfightbetweenthepoorslaveandabloodthirstybeast.When Androcles appearedinthearena,theybegantocheerandhoot.Alleyeswereonhim,andtimeseemedtostop. Overcome byastaboffear,healmostcollapsedtotheground,hisheartpoundingandhiskneesshaking.Andthencameafuriousroarandthegreat lion chargedathimwithitsflamingeyesandgapingjaws.Desperateandhopeless,theslaveclosedhiseyesanddroppedhissword,thinkingthathewasdonefor. Paragraph2: However,theliondidn’tactasmosthadimagined. Muchtotheir surprise,thesavagebeaststoppedshort,kneltdownandthen lickedtheslave’shandsandfeet.Hebehavedlikeapetdog.Andthenheletoutalowroar,asifwhisperingtohisfriend,“Didn’tyourecognizeme?”Indeed,itwastheveryliontheslavehadhelpedinthe forest.Sighingwith relief,theslavestrokedhisneck gently,tearsof gratitude wellingupinhiseyes.Somovedwerepeoplebythestorythattheybeggedthemastertosetfreetheslaveandthelion.Onegoodturndeservesanother,andintheend,Androcles,theslave,becameafreeman.(05),优点英语Paragraph1: Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmencametome.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyes. Surely,itwasmylong-lostfriend,Arthur,alwayswearingawarmsmile.WhatacoincidencethatArthurwouldappearinfrontofmewhenIhad trouble!Ithought.Forasecond,Istaredathimindisbelief,mymouthhangingopen.InthemeanwhileTominstantlyrecognizedmeandhegavemeahugehug.“Whatbringsyouhere?”heaskedwithapuzzledexpressiononhisface.SoItoldhimthatmy car gotaflattireandthatconsideringthepoorroadcondition,itmight brokedownonmywaybackhome.Knowingwhathadhappenedtome,hesaidthathewouldbegladtogivemeahandagain.Paragraph2: Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit. Afterlisteningtothesoundoftheengine,Arthurtoldmethattherewasnothingwrongwithit.Andthentheystartedtofixthetireandwechatted happily.Arthurtoldmethatthe thank-younote frommeinspiredhimtolivea meaningful lifebyhelpingothers.Soonafterwards,hegotthetirefixed.Hegotup,wipedthesweatfromhisfaceandwishedmeapleasantjourney.Icouldn’tthankhimenough.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetthelessonArthurtaughtme:Lifeismeaningfulwhenyoucangiveahandtothoseintrouble.(06)Paragraph1: Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp. Heexposedhissharpteeth,snarlingatus,ashe ran forward.Andagainthefuriouscreaturestoodonhisbacklegsandbegantosnapatthe fence likeademon.Itseemedthathismouthwasdrippingwithbloodandhiseyeswereredwithrage.Atthesightofit,Icouldfeelaflickeroffearfloodingoverme,and Ellis wasstunned,hermouthhangingopen.Itwasonlythenthatmymindbegantorace.Onceagain,Ipluckedmycouragetoblasthimwithpepper spray,butwithoutsuccess.Thenallofasudden,cameacrashofthefencefallingdown.Paragraph2: Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived. Itlandedinaclearing,notfarfromourcamp,andtheloud noises fromtherescuehelicopterscaredthebear.Foraninstant,hefroze,but,优点英语afterawhile,hestartedtochargeatusagain."Ellis!"Ishrieked,"Lookout!"Weimmediatelysteppedaside,spunroundandgallopedtowardsthehelicopter.Themomentwewereintothehelicopter,wecollapsed,gaspingwithrelief.Asittookoff,wecouldseethebearwashungrilyeatingthe bread wehadmade.Whatahungrybear!Afterwereturnedhome safe andsound,werealizedthatsomethingshouldbedoneforbears.(07)Paragraph1: Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck. Afamiliarfigureleapedout, rushed towardsmeandwadedintothewater.Thankgoodness,itwas Joe whocametomyrescue.However,thewaterwasrunningsorapidlythathehadtogoback. Frightened andalittleangry,Icouldhardlyhelpsheddingtears.HowIwishedthatmyhusbandwerelikeasupermanwhocouldsavemefromdisaster.But,afterawhile,itturnedoutthatJoereturnedwithoneendofaropeinhishandandtheotherendtiedtothetruck.He struggled tothrowtheropetomeand shouted,"Catch!Openthedoor!"Paragraph2: IscreamedthatIcouldn'tmakeit. Atthatmoment,thesoundoftheragingwateroutsidegrewlouder,andthecarrockedmoreviolently.Worsestill,thewatercameuptoJoe’swaistandhealmostlosthisfootinginthewater.Afterseveralvainattempts,Joe realized thattherewasnochancetomakeit.Heputeveryounceofstrengthintogettingclosetomeandsaidsoothingly,"Don'tpanic,honey!I'mhere."WithJoe'shelp,Iburstthedooropen,andJoeimmediatelytiedtheropearoundmywaist.Themomentwepulledourselvesoutofthewater,thecarwaswashedaway.Whatanarrowescape!IhuggedJoetightly,happinessandlovewellingupinsideme.,优点英语Part4：灵活应用例1：人与麻雀阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It'sgettinghot.It'stimetoputonlighterclothesandopenupthewindows.Ican'twaittodoso.Yesterday,anunforeseenvisittothekitchenhappenedduringthebrieftimewewereout.Twodaringsparrows(麻雀)hadriskedlandingonourterritorytoenjoythefreshnessinoursinkandsomeotherbreadcrumbs(面包屑)onourkitchencounter.Actually,sparrowsareeverywhere.Thetiny,gray-andbrownbirdsarefoundoneverycontinentexceptAntarctica,flyingorjumpingaroundcities,pickingupleftoverfoodonside-walks,andsometimeschasingwithnativebirdspecies.Thesesmallcreatureshaveadaptedtolivingalongsidehumans-similartopetdogs.Whenyoucomeacrosssuchsuddencallers,youarelikelytosenseitasanunwantedvisitorintoyourcomfortzone,oryoumightreceiveitasalovelyangeloflife.Ichosethesecondoption,withnohesitationwhilemyhusbandpreferreddrivingthemaway.Afterall,I'venevercometostoptofeeltherelationshipwithsparrows.IrecalledwhenIwasalittlegirllivinginthecity,Ilivedinanapartmentwithaflatroofviewedfromourkitchenwindow.EverydaymymomandIwouldgoouttofeedthesparrows.Shetaughtmehowtocallthemwithaclickingsoundshemadewithhertongue.Ihavelovedsparrowseversince.Soeverydayinmysparetime,Ican'tstopobservingandcelebratingtheirdancefromourwindow.Istuffedthemwiththeleftoversonourtableclothaftereverymeal.AndIhaveprovidedthemwitheverykindofbasesandstandsofourhouse.Undoubtedly,theyfeelateaseinourbackyard.Andthathasledthemtogatherupcourageandslideintoourkitchen,bedroomorevenreadingroom.Perhapsbecausetheyhavethefeelingthatwedon'tconsiderthemtroublemakers,butfriendlyneighbors.ButIamslightlyworriedabouttheirdroppings(粪便).注意:,优点英语1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Oneday,theyleftsomedroppingsinmyhusband'sreadingroom._______________________________________________________________________________Abouttwoweekslater,Iheardmyhusbandcalling“Oh,myGod!”_______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Oneday,theyleftsomedroppingsinmyhusband'sreadingroom.Theyhappenedtodirtyhisimportantworkreportsonthedesk.Hewassoangrythatheaskedmetoclosethewindows.Iimmediatelydidathoroughcleaningandpromisedthatthedoorsandwindowsofthereadingroomwillbeclosedtightly,andthesparrowscan'tbreakinagain.Myhusbandkeptsilent,andatlasthecalmeddown.Iknowheisacaringperson,whoalwayslovesanimals.Abouttwoweekslater,Iheardmyhusbandcalling“Oh,myGod!”Thinkingsomethingsimilarhappenedagain,Iranovertohavealook.Hewaslookingoutofthewindowandsaidexcitedly,“Look!Whatasurprise!Therearethreeeggsinthesparrow'snest!They'regoingtohavebabiesoftheirown!”Hewashappy,likeachildandunconsciouslyopenedtheclosedwindow.Afterthat,therearealwaysbreadcrumbsonthewindowplatformofthereadingroom.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢迎它们的到来，在后院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是有点担心它们的粪便。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些粪便，所以应该写粪便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理，与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说:“哦，天哪!”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。,优点英语【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：doathoroughcleaning，breakin，runover，havealook等高级词汇；结果状语从句，如Hewassoangrythatheaskedmetoclosethewindows；宾语从句，如Iimmediatelydidathoroughcleaningandpromisedthatthedoorsandwindowsofthereadingroomwillbeclosedtightly,andthesparrowscan'tbreakinagain；定语从句，如Iknowheisacaringperson,whoalwayslovesanimals等高级句式。Part5：高考真题再现真题1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情绪)getthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit.”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit,Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried,“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”,优点英语“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(摆动)eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案1】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightof,优点英语thelittledog.Sheloweredherheadtowatchitcuriously.Thenshebecamesoexcitedthatsheaccidentallyknockedovertheboxinanattempttogetcloser.Withtheboxtippingover,outcamethelittleone,whowasnotshyandinstantlygotfamiliarwithPoppy.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforethetwoplayedaroundthehouse,cheerfullyrunningaftereachother.爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Hehadbeenmissinghisparentsandthedogsinceitwasthefirsttimethathehadbeenawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.WhentheboycaughtsightofPoppy,hewentrushingtowardthedogandbentdowntogiveherabighug.Suddenly,theboynoticedthelittledog.“Ohmygod,whoisthis?”Hisparentslaughedatthelookofsurpriseonhisface.“It’sPoppy’snewcompanion.”saidMom.(155)几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。【参考答案2】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Itwashidinginonecornerofthebox,withacuriouslookinitseyes.Waggingitstail,ittriedtoclimboutofthebox,butitfelldownonitsback,unabletostandup.Uponseeingthis,hisparentscouldnothelplaughing.Gently,Mompickeditupfromtheboxandputitonthefloor."Poppy,isn′titasweetdog?It'sforyou!"Momsaidinasoftvoice."It'syourcompanion."Cheerfulandyetalittlenervous,Poppykeptrunningandbarkingatthenewfamilymember.ButMuchtothereliefofhisparents,theywerelikepeasandcarrotssoonafterwards,anditseemedasifRopphadforgottenheroldfriend.,优点英语爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Poppythrewherselfathimandlickedhishandsandfaceexcitedly,hereyessparklingwithdelightandhertailwaggingfuriously.IttooktheboyforalongtimetonoticethattherewasacutepuppybesidePoppy,growlingandsniffingathisfeet.Immediately,hebentdown,strokeditsheadandasked,"Whatanadorablepuppy!Whoseisit?"Hisparentssmiledandreplied,"WegotitforPuppybecause.."KnowingwhathadhappenedtoPoppywhenhewasattheuniversity,theboywassomovedthathetooktheoldgirlinhisarms.Tearsburredhisvisionashemurmured,"Poppy,Imissyou,too."Andquietly,PoppyraisedherheadandwatchedtheyoungteenagerlikexWabyinhisarms.几周后，男孩从大学回家。波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问：“多么可爱的小狗啊！是谁的？”他的父母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为......”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，把那个老女孩抱在怀里。他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。”然后静静地，波比抬起头，看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。真题2：拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingat,优点英语aresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,优点英语Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.____________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.______________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!,优点英语几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。第2部分：就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！
