发表观点写作练兵(2022青岛改编)现在,很多中学生被近视困扰,请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括:1.造成近视的原因;2.近视对学习或生活的影响;3.你认为应该如何保护视力?(至少两条建议)要求:1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。Quitealotofstudentshavebecomenearsightednow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题指导】细读所给提示,提取以下信息:1.以“学生患近视”为话题,写一篇关于近视的记叙文;2.内容包括近视的原因,对人的影响以及自己提出的保护视力的方法或建议;3.描述现象时,时态为一般现在时;4.词数:80左右,文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。【写作指导】中学生近视要点提示素材串联开头:提出问题相当多的学生近视(havebecomenearsighted)正文:分析原因,描述影响,提出建议。1.近视产生的原因(学习时习惯不好)(agoodhabit,study)2.近视对学习或生活的影响:(1)没有眼镜上课不能记笔记(athome,takenotes,inclass)(2)游泳时戴着眼镜不方便(feeluncomfortable,swimwith5\nglasses)3.建议保护视力的办法:(1)不要长时间看书,不休息(ontheonehand,shouldn’tstudyforhours,needtorelax)(2)多进行体育活动,做眼保健操(ontheotherhand,havesports,doeyeexercises,helpful)结尾:提出倡议,保护眼睛。拥有好的视力很重要,保护好眼睛(veryimportant,havegoodeyesight,takegoodcareof)【高分范文】Quite_a_lot_of_students_have_become_nearsighted_now.Ithinkthemainreasonisthatstudentsdon’thaveagoodhabitwhilestudying.Badeyesightbringstroubletoourlifeandstudy.Forexample,ifweleaveourglassesathome,wecan’ttakenotesinclass.Wewillfeeluncomfortablewhenweswimwithglasses.Hereismyadvice:ontheonehand,teenagersshouldn’tstudyforhourswithoutbreaksbecauseoureyesneedtorelax.Ontheotherhand,havingsportsanddoingeyeexercisesarealsohelpful.It’sveryimportanttohavegoodeyesight.Solet’stakegoodcareofoureyes.5\n话题2 发表观点(2022年考查)Passage2(2022商丘模拟)近几年,中学生出国求学已经成为一种新的“时尚”,大家对此褒贬不一,请你写一篇英语短文,并发表自己的看法,内容包含支持者与反对者的观点。要求:1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.80词左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5\n【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,提取以下信息:1.要求写人们对出国求学的看法,因此写作文体为议论文;2.描述支持者和反对者的观点时用第三人称,阐述自己的观点时用第一人称,时态用一般现在时;3.词数在80词左右,不得出现真实姓名、校名。【写作指导】出国求学引热议要点提示素材串联开头:引出论点越来越多的中学生选择出国求学(goabroad)正文支持者的观点1.可以更好地学习外语,了解外国文化,开阔眼界(learnforeignlanguage;knowforeignculture;opentheirmind)2.培养自理能力和交往的能力(theabilityofindependenceandcommunication)反对者的观点1.不利于中学生的身心发展(bebadfor;development)2.一些中学生为了逃避压力而出国留学(pressure)3.部分留学生给外国人留下了不好的印象(badimpression)结尾:抒发自己的观点1.出国留学好与坏取决于个人(dependontheindividual)2.出国要三思(takemorefactorsintoconsideration)【高分范文】Recently,moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentschoosetogoabroadtostudy.Peoplehavedifferentideasaboutthis.Somepeoplesaythatstudyingabroadcanmakestudentslearnforeignlanguages,knowforeigncultureandopentheirmind.Also,itcandeveloptheirabilitiesofindependenceandcommunicationwithothers.5\nButothersthinkstudyingabroadtooearlyisbadforstudents’developmentofbodyandmind.Somestudentsdoitjustbecauseoftoomuchpressure.Atthesametime,someleavebadimpressiononforeigners.Therefore,whetheritisgoodornottostudyabroaddependsontheindividual.Sotakemorefactorsintoconsideration.5