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An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson.Suddenlyacrow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)ontheirwindow.Thefatheraskedhisson,“What’sthis?”Thesonreplied,“It’sacrow.”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime,“What’sthis?”Thesonsaid,“Father,justnowItoldyouthatit’sacrow!”Afteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime,“What’sthis?”Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritation(恼怒)wasfeltintheson’stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwitharebuff(生硬回绝),“It’sacrow,acrow.”Alittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonforthefourthtime,“What’sthis?”Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,“Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes“ITISACROW”?Areyounotabletounderstandthis?”
Alittlewhilelater,thefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(破烂的，破旧的)diary,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn.Onopeningapage,heaskedhissontoreadthatpage.Whenthesonreadit,thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary:“Todaymylittleson(agedthree)wassittingwithmeonthesofawhenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotatallfeelirritatedbutIratherfeltaffection(喜爱)formyinnocentson.”
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OnedayWhenwhowhereAn80-year-oldman’shouseAn80-year-oldman&HissonNarrator叙事者“thirdperson”perspective第三人称视角Tense:________________Simplepasttense文本解读SettingCharacter
CharacteranalysisDetails.Afteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime,“What’sthis?”Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritation(恼怒)wasfeltintheson’stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwitharebuff(生硬回绝),“It’sacrow,acrow.”.文本解读Alittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonforthefourthtime,“What’sthis?”Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes“ITISACROW”?Areyounotabletounderstandthis?”
CharacteranalysisDetailsAlittlewhilelater,thefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(破烂的，破旧的)diary,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn..文本解读...“Todaymylittleson(agedthree)wassittingwithmeonthesofawhenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotatallfeelirritatedbutIratherfeltaffection(喜爱)formyinnocentson.”
CharacteranalysisBehaviorsHowwouldthesonfeelafterreadingthediary?Whatchangemayheexperienceinhismind?Whatwouldhedotomakeupforhisfault?文本解读
WorkouttheconflictortheclimaxBeginningDevelopmentConflictClimax/Endingthe80-year-oldfatheraskedhis45-year-oldson4timesthesamequestionRemembertosolvetheconflict.acrow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)ontheirwindow..文本解读+创设情境thefathertookoutanoldtattered(破烂的，破旧的)diary,(whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn)Plot
A.aforgetfulfather.B.arudeson.C.afamilytragedy.D.atouchingfather-sonstory.thefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(破烂的，破旧的)_____,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborndiaryclue线索文本解读+主题探究Theme
【Paragraph1】Afterreadingthediary,theson’seyeswerefilledwithtearsandbegantoreflectonthedays(whenheusedtosittogetherwithhisfather.).【Paragraph2:】[Feelingashamed],thesongotdownonhiskneesbeforehisfather..创设情节突出主题Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAddsomedetailsbyraisingquestions?(回到原文找信息)WouldRomanhelpthemoutofdanger/gooutside?
(Paragraph2:)[Feelingashamed],theson......Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAdddetailsbyraisingquestionsWouldhefacehismistakebravely?Wouldhemakeanapologyforhismistake?创设情节突出主题
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Afterreadingthediary,theson’seyeswerefilledwithtearsandbegantoreflectonthedays(whenheusedtosittogetherwithhisfather.)Hisfatherwouldpatientlyanswerthesamequestionall23times[withoutfeelingirritation][while]hisfatheraskedhimthesamequestionjustfourtimes!Thesonthoughttohimself:IfIattainoldage,howwillmysonlookatme?Willhethinkofmeasaburden?Willheshoutatme[becauseofmypoorsight,poorhearingorpoorunderstanding?.动作描写情绪、感受、心理活动描写范文赏析承上启下情绪、感受、心理活动描写
(Paragraph2:)[Feelingashamed],thesongotdownonhiskneesbeforehisfather.Hemadeanapologytohisfather,[begginghisfathertoforgivehimforhisbadbehaviour.]Hesaidthisaloud,“Ipromisetomakeyouhappyforever,Dad.Itisyouwhohavecaredforme[eversince]Iwasalittlechild,[showeringyourselflessaffectiononme.]YouworkedhardtomakemoneysothatIcouldafford/togotouniversity.Iwillserveyou[inthebestway][nomatterhowyoubehave].”动作描写故事情境描写情绪、感受、心理活动描写语言/对话描写升华主题
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