中考一模考试英语试题（满分：120分考试时间：100分钟）注意事项考生在答题前请认真阅读本注意事项及各题答题要求：1.本试卷共8页，包含选择题（第1题～第45题，共60分）、非选择题（第46题～第81题，共60分）两部分。本次考试时间为100分钟，满分120分。考试结束后，请将答题纸交回。2.答题前，请考生务必将自己的学校、班级、姓名、准考证号用0.5毫米的黑色签字笔写在答题纸上相应的位置。请在答题纸指定区域作答，在试卷或草稿纸上作答一律无效。一、单项选择（共15小题；每小题l分，计15分）在下列各题A、B、C、D四个选项中选择一个能填入题干空白处的最佳答案。1.The“ChineseDream”is____dreamtoimprovepeople’shappinessand____dreamofharmony,peaceanddevelopment.A.the;aB.a;aC.a;theD.the;the2.Variouswayshavebeenprovidedforustosolvetheproblem.Wecanchoose_____tostartwith.A.itB.thatC.eachD.one3.Mum________tous,“Bequiet!Yourlittlesister’ssleeping.”A.whisperedB.shoutedC.explainedD.replied4.Dogshaveaverygood______ofsmellandareoftenusedtosearchforsurvivorsintheearthquake. A.senseB.viewC.meaningD.idea5.Theleadersarediscussingtheproblemrightnow.Itwill______besolvednextweek.A.easilyB.hopefullyC.immediatelyD.hardly6.Danny_______hardforlongtorealizehisdreamandnowheispopular.A.worksB.isworkingC.hasworkedD.worked7.It’sreportedthattheSlenderWestLakeTunnel_________in2022.A.iscompletedB.willbecompletedC.wascompletedD.hasbeencompleted8.---AreyoucomingtoJeff’sparty?---I’mnotsure.I_______gototheconcertinsteadA.mustB.wouldC.shouldD.might9.---Excusemesir,whereisRoom301?---Justaminute.I’llaskBob________youtoyourroom.A.showB.showsC.toshowD.showing10.Hehasfinishedwritinghisnewbookanditwill__________soon.A.workoutB.comeoutC.gooutD.takeout11.---Whatdidtheteachersaytoyoujustnow?---Sheaskedme_______________.A.whetherIhadfinishedmyworkB.ifhadIfinishedmyworkC.thatIhadfinishedmyworkD.howlonghadIfinishedmywork\n12.Don’tpromiseanything________youareonehundredpercentsure.A.ifB.afterC.whenD.unless13.ProfessorWhitehaswrittensomeshortstories,butheis_____forhisplays.A.more-knownB.themost-knownC.better-knownD.thebest-known14.______thestudentswerewhentheyheardthegoodnews!A.HowexcitedB.HowexcitingC.WhatexcitedD.Whatexciting15.---I’mthinkingofthetesttomorrow.I’mafraidIcan’tpassthistime.---_______!I’msureyou’llmakeit.A.GoonB.GoodluckC.NoproblemD.Cheerup二、完形填空（共15小题；每小题l分，计15分）阅读下列短文，从文后各题所给的四个选项中选出一个最佳答案。Onesunnyafternoon,aseven-year-oldgirlwentforawalk.Shecrossedalargeareaofgrasslandintothewoods__16__sherealizedthatshewaslost.Sittingonarockand__17__whattodo,shebegancrying.Afterawhile，she__18__towalkalongapathwithtalltreesandthickbushes.Whenitwasgettingdark,shesawasmall,darkwoodenhouse.Sheopenedthedoorand__19__entered.Suddenly,sheheardastrangenoise,andsheranoutofthedoorandbacktothe__20__.Coldandtired,shefellasleepnearastream（小溪）.Thegirl’sparentswereoutandherdog,Laddy,wasathome.Laddysensedthathismistress（女主人）wasindanger.Hejumped__21__awindow,breakingtheglass.Helookedinthefields.Buthecouldn’tfindhismistressanywhere.However,fromthegroundcamea__22__scent(气味)asheloweredhishead.He__23__thescentandwalkedacrossthegrassland.Barking__24__intotheair,thedog__25__throughthewoodsuntilhefoundthe__26__.Butthegirlwasnotthere,soheheadedbacktothewoods.Muchtohisdelight,hesawhismistress’blueshirtinthedistance.He__27__oversomebushesandsawthelittlestream,wherethegirlwas__28__.Whensheopenedhereyesand29herdogstandingbesideher,thegirlsaid,“you30me,Laddy,”andshekissedhimseveraltimes.Seeingtheirdaughteranddogcomingback,theparentswerehappy.ThatnightLaddyhadahero’ssupper:ahugemealofpork.16.A.beforeB.sinceC.whileD.as17.A.wonderingB.forgettingC.rememberingD.repeating18.A.preferredB.refusedC.failedD.decided19.A.carelesslyB.carefullyC.hopelesslyD.unwillingly20.A.treesB.bushesC.woodsD.grasses21.A.atB.throughC.inD.onto22.A.terribleB.strangeC.pleasantD.familiar23.A.missedB.discoveredC.followedD.noticed\n24.A.calmlyB.loudlyC.happilyD.gently25.A.searchedB.foundC.lookedD.travelled26.A.windowB.girlC.houseD.hero27.A.jumpedB.climbedC.walkedD.flew28.A.awakeB.afraidC.availableD.asleep29.A.listenedB.watchedC.heardD.saw30.A.disturbedB.comfortedC.savedD.scared三、阅读理解（共l5小题；每小题2分，计30分）阅读下列内容，从每小题所给的四个选项中选出一个最佳答案。AThesedays,picturenewsisverypopularwithyoungpeople.HerearesomephotoschosenbyJim.China’sfirstHelloKittythemerestaurantwasopenedonDec23inthecapitalofChina.It’sallpinkandsweetinsidetherestaurant.Thetablecloth,chairs,ceilingandfloorareallpink,eventhelamplightshinessoftandrosy.DiningatHelloKittyDreamsRestaurantcostsabout160yuan($25)perperson.DustinandSarafromNorthGeorgia&StateUniversity(NGCSU)oftheUnitedStatesperformPekingOperaatLiaoChengUniversityinEastChina’sShandongProvince.EighteenstudentsfromNGCSUcametoChinatostudyChinesecultureduringthesummervacation.LocatedinMiyunCountynorth-eastofBeijing,FulingMountainisanational-levelforestreserve.Asthemountainiscloudyandfoggyalltheyearround,FulingMountainthenbegantobecalledWulingMountain.ItisregardedastheYellowMountaininNorthChina.BillGates,chairmanofMicrosoft,theworld’slargestpersonal-computersoftwarecompany,attendedananti-smokingeventaheadofthe25thWorldNo-TobaccoDay,inBeijingonMay29,2022.SomeChinesefamouspeoplealsoattendedtheevent.WorldNo-TobaccoDayfallsonMay31everyyear.31.WhatdidDustinandSaradoinChina?A.TheyclimbedFulingMountaininBeijing.B.TheyvisitedaHelloKittyDreamsRestaurant.C.TheyperformedPekingOperainShandong.D.Theyattendedananti-smokingevent.32.Whichistrueaccordingtothepassage?A.BillGatessetupWorldNo-TobaccoDayonMay31.B.FulingMountainisalwayscloudyandfoggy.C.EightstudentsfromNGCSUstudiedChinesecultureinChina.D.YouhavetowearpinkclothesatHelloKittyDreamsRestaurant.33.Thephotosmaycomefrom______________.\nA.TheInternetnewsB.anadvertisementC.asciencemagazineD.astorybookBFredAstairewasborninNebraskain1899.Fredandhissister,Adele,learnedtodancewhentheywereveryyoung.TheirmothertookthemtoNewYorktostudydance.Theyperformedintheirfirstprofessional（专业的）showwhenFredwastenyearsoldandAdelewastwelve.Later,asteenagers,thetwodancedinmanyshowsthroughouttheUnitedStates.TheirfirstbigsuccesswasonBroadwayin1917.TheAstaires--astheywereknown--quicklybecameBroadwaystars.Duringthenineteentwenties,theysanganddancedinelevendifferentshows.TheyalsoperformedinEngland.In1932,AdeleAstairemarriedaBritishman,andstoppedperforming.ButFreddidnotforegohisdream.Hewouldgoonalone,inthemovies.FredAstairehadthebestskillamongalldancersinhistory.HedancedupwallsandontheceilinginthefilmRoyalWedding.HedancedonrooftopsinTheBelleofNewYork.HedancedonrollerskatesinShallWeDance?FredAstairemadeallthislookeasy.Butitwasnot.Hesaid:"Dancingisasweatyjob.Youcannotjustsitdownanddoit.Youhavetogetuponyourfeet.Ittakestimetogetadanceright,tocreatesomethingmemorable.IalwaystrytogettoknowmydancesowellthatIdonothavetothink.”In1949,FredAstairewonaspecialawardforhisfilmworkfromAmerica'sMotionPictureAcademy.Healsowonawardsfromthetelevisionindustryforanumberofhistelevisionprograms.Fredstoppeddancingin1970.Hewasmorethanseventyyearsoldatthetime.Hesaidadancercouldnotcontinuedancingforever.Hesaidhedidnotwanttodisappoint（使失望）anyone,evenhimself.Hedancedagaininpubliconlyonceafterthat.Itwaswithanothergreatmaledancer,GeneKelly,inthemovie"That'sEntertainment,PartTwo".FredAstaireandhisfirstwife,Phyllis,hadthreechildren.Phyllisdiedin1954.Twenty-fiveyearslater,FredmarriedracehorseriderRobynSmith.FredAstairediedonJune22,1987.Hewaseighty-eightyearsold.Hewascalledthegreatestdancerintheworld.Hisdancingwascalledperfect.Andmoviegoerseverywherewillrememberhimasagreatperformerwhoseworkwillliveforeverinhisfilms.34.Thefirstparagraphismainlyabout_________.A.FredAstaire’sfirstsuccessB.FredAstaire’seducationC.FredAstaire’searlylifeD.FredAstaire’sfamily35.Whatdoestheunderlinedword“forgo”inParagraph2mean?A.GetoverB.SetupC.GoaheadD.Giveup36.WhatFredAstairesaidinParagraph4showsthat___________.A.heknewhisdancewaswonderfulB.hethoughtdancingwasnotdifficultC.hedevotedmuchtimeandefforttodanceD.hehadwaystomakepeoplerememberhim37.Whatisthecorrecttimeorderofthefollowingevents?\na.FredAstaire’sfirstwifedied.b.Fred’ssisterAdelestoppedperforming.c.FredAstaireperformedwithGeneKellyinamovie.d.FredAstairewonanawardfromAmerica’sMotionPictureAcademy.A.abcdB.bdacC.dcbaD.cbadCIthasmorethan845millionusersworldwide.Ifitwereacountry,itwouldhavethethirdlargestpopulationintheworld,behindChinaandIndia.ThisisFacebook,apopularwebsitefromtheUS.ItissimilartoRenreninChina.MarkZuckerberwasbornonMay14,1984.Asalittlekid,helovedcreatinglittlefuncomputerprograms.HesetupthenetworkinFebruaryof2022.Hewasthenasecond-yearstudentatHarvardUniversity.Oneday,hehadtheideaofbuildingawebsiteforHarvardstudentstogettoknoweachother.HesetuptheFacebookwebsite.Harvardstudentscouldsharephotosandtheirpersonalinformationthere.Soon,thewebsitebecameveryfamous.ZuckerbergdecidedtoleaveHarvardtorunFacebookfulltime.Itwasthebiggestadventureinhislifeandlaterbroughthimgreatsuccess.Now,theserviceispopulararoundtheworld.Greetingssuchas“HaveyoucheckedyourFacebookpagetoday?”becameapartofyoungpeople’severydaylanguageintheUS.PeoplecanexchangemessageandgetthelatestinformationabouttheirfriendsonFacebook.Zuckerberg’sdreamistoconnectpeoplethroughtheInternet.“Facebookistomaketheworldmoreopenandconnected,”hesaid.What’stheyoungman’ssecrettosuccess?Zuckerbergbelievesit’simportanttohaveanopenmindandbereadytotrynewthings.“Theriskiestthingistotakenorisks,”heoncesaidinanopenletter.Sometimesthesimplestideasgofurthest.WehopeMarZuckerbergcangomuchfurther,maybeevenfurtherthanBillGates.38.Theunderlinedword“it“inthefirstparagraphrefersto_________.A.FacebookB.RenrenC.IndiaD.China39.PeoplecandothefollowingonFacebookexcept__________.A.exchangemessagesB.shareinformationC.doonlineshoppingD.putupphotos40.Whichisthecorrectorderofthefollowingevents?a.ZuckerstudiedinHarvardUniversity.b.Facebookispopulararoundtheworld.c.ZuckerbergdroppedoutofHarvard.d.ZuckbergsetuptheFacebookwebsite.A.a-b-c-dB.a-c-b-dC.a-d-b-cD.a-d-c-b41.WhydidZuckerbergstartFacebook?A.Becausehewantedtocollectsomemoney.B.Becausehewantedtoconnectpeopleonline.C.BecausehefeltboredwhenstudyinginHarvard.D.Becausehedidn’tknowhisclassmatesverywell.DNowscientistshavediscoveredthatthedogsbehaveliketheirmasters,too.Justlikechildren,theyusea“lookandlearn”wayswhentheygoabouttheir\ntasks.ScientistsatOxforduniversitiesdesignedanexperimenttotestifthedogshavetheabilitytocopyhumans’actionsbyusingasimplewoodenbox.10ownersshowedtheirdogshowtoopenthewoodenbox.Sometimestheyusetheirheadstopushitandsometimestheyusetheirhands.10dogsweredividedintotwogroups---Group1andGroup2.Inthefirstpartofthetest,Group1wererewardedwithapieceofmeatforcopyingtheirowner’sactions.Group2wererewardedwithfoodfornotcopyingandusingotherways.Witheachdogtheexperimentwasrepeatedhundredsoftimes.Scientistsrecordedthetimetoseewhichgroupwasfirsttoget85%right.TheyfoundthatGroup1finishedthetaskmuchsoonerthanGroup2.Inthesecondpartofthetest,allthedogswereonlyrewardedforcopyingthewaythattheirownersused.Group1reachedthe85%markmorequicklythanGroup2.Sothescientistsdrawaconclusion:“Likehumans,dogscancopyactionsthattheysee.Dogs’imitative（仿效的）behaviorisshapedmorebytheirinteractions（互动）withhumansthanbyevolution(进化).”Scientistssaid，“Adog’sbehaviorisinfluencedmuchlikethatofachild;theylookandlearnsimilarbehavior.Wehopethatownersunderstandtheimportanceoftheiractionsandusethisknowledgetosetgoodexamplesandthereforehaveagoodeffectonthebehavioroftheirpets.”42.Thescientistsbelievedog’simitativebehaviormainlycomesfrom______________.A.properrewardsB.domesticationC.human-doginteractionsD.evolution43.Thebesttitlemaybe“___________________”A.Dogscanfinishtheirtasksquickly.B.Dogsareinterestinganimals.C.Mastersalwayssetgoodexamples.D.Dogsbehaveliketheirmasters.44.Fromtheexperiment,weknow__________________.A.Ittookthetwogroupsofdogsthesametimetofinishtherequiredtask.B.Thedogsthatcopiedtheirmastersfinishedtherequiredtaskmuchsooner.C.Thedogsthatwereencouragedtocopytheirmastersfinishedthetaskmoreslowly..D.Thedogsthatwereencouragednottocopytheirmastersfinishedthetaskmorequickly..45.Accordingtothelastparagraph,wecaninfer______________.A.acruelmancanraiseacrueldogB.dogscanbeinfluencedbyanyoneC.dogsalwaysbehavepositivelyD.dogsarethebestkindofpets四、词汇运用（共l0小题；每小题l分，计l0分）根据句子意思，用括号中所给汉语提示或英语单词的适当形式填空。在答题卡标有题号的横线上，写出空缺处所填单词的正确形式。（每空一词）46Thatgirlwalkedpastmequickly▲sayinganything.(没有)47.Sheboughtabunchofflowersforherfather’s▲birthdayasapresent.(四十)48.Theroomisfilledwithsmoke,anditisbecomingdifficultto▲.(呼吸)49.Everybodyshould▲joininthischaritytoraisemoneyforthepoor.(积极)\n50.MH370with239people▲contactonMarch8th,2022.(失去，丢失)51.WhenIcameintheywerehavinga▲ontheproblem.(discuss)52.Iwassohappytomeetafriendof▲inthestreetyesterday.(I)53.Ittakes▲timetogettherebyundergroundthanbybus.(little)54.Hehasdecidedtofindajobina▲(south)city.55.Withthemoneywehave▲sentmanypoorchildrentoschool.(success)五、任务型阅读（共l0空；每空l分，计l0分）阅读下列短文，根据短文中的信息完成文后表格。在答题卡标有题号的横线上，写出空缺处所填单词的正确形式。（每空一词）Weeatfoodtogetenergy,soweshouldeatwhenwefeelhungry.Butdowereallyeatonlywhenwearehungry?No,wesometimeseatevenwhenwe’renothungry,andthiscausesovereating----eatingtoomuch.Butovereatingcandoalotofharm,asitcancauseobesity（肥胖）thatcancauseheartproblemsandotherillnesses.Therearemanycommonreasonsthatmakeuseattoomuch.Meetingfriendsmaybegoodforoursociallife,butitcanalsobeoneofthemainreasonsforovereating.Weusuallypaynoattentiontoourhealthwhenwemeetwithfriends.Moodssuchasanger,sadness,happiness,feararethemostcommononesthatmakeuseatfoodtohelpusfeelbetter.Busylifestylescanhaveaneffectonoureatinghabits.Westarteatingtooquicklyjusttosavetime,asaresult,weeatmorethanourbody’srequirement.Whenweeatmealsorsnackstoofast,ourbraintakessometimetorealizethatit’sfull,andofcourseitresultsinovereating.TemperatureplaysaveryimportantroleindecidingourfoodhabitatInwinters,weusuallyhavewarmorhotdrinkslikecoffee,tea,hotchocolateandheavymealstokeepourselveswarm.Insummers,wehaveicedreams,dessertsandotherdrinks.Thesefoodswiththeregularfoodaddtocalorieandleadtoovereating.Supermarketshavelotsofattractiveofferstogetustobuythingsthatwemayormaynotneed.Thereisnodoubtweloveeatingandwhenweareservedwithourfavouritefood,weactlikewehaveneverseenfoodbefore.Wehavealwaysbeentaughttofinisheverythingthatisontheplate.So,evenwhenwestartfeelingfull,wekeeponeatingtillourplateisemptyortillwestopfeelingguiltyaboutwastingfood.Howtocontrolhowmuchyouputinyourstomach?herearesomeways.Usesmallerplatesandtall,skinnyglasses.Itseemsthatthereismorefoodontheplateandmoretodrinkintheglass.Smallerservingcontainers（容器）helpstopyoufromputtingmuchfoodanddrink.Makethesweetsandothersnacksoutofreach.Getthecandydishoffyourdeskandsetoutabowloffruitinstead.Don’tovereat___56_thatiscausedbyovereatingOvereatingcancauseobesityandsomeillnesses.Common___57___ofovereating*Whenweeatwithourfriends,weeattoomuch___58___payingattentiontoourhealth.\n*Whenwe__59____fromdifferentmoods,weoftenturntofoodtofeelbetter.*Busylifestylescan__60____oureatinghabits.Weeattoofasttosavetime.*Becauseoftemperaturesindifferent__61_____,wehavesomefoodthataddstocalorie.*Attractiveoffersinthesupermarketsmakeusbuyandeatour___62____food.*Wedon’t__63____eatinguntiltheplateisempty.__64___tocontrolovereating*Don’tuse__65_____servingcontainerswhenyoueatfoodordrink.*Don’tmakeiteasytoeattheunhealthyfood.六、缺词填空（共10空；每空l分，计l0分）根据短文内容和首字母提示，在下文空格处填入适当的词使短文完整。在答题卡标有题号的横线上，写出空缺处各单词的正确形式。（每空一词）Oncetherewasababyeagle（鹰）livinginanest（巢）onacliff（山崖）.Thebabyeaglelovedhisnest.Itwaswarm,soft,andcomfortable.Andevenb66,hehadallthefoodandlove.Whenthebabyeaglewash__67___,hismotherwouldalwayscomejustintimewiththedeliciousfood.Hewasgrowingh____68____dayafterday.Butsuddenlyhisworldchangedoneday.Hismotherstoppedcomingtothenest.Hewasfullofs___69___andfear.Hethoughthewoulddiesoon.Hecried,butnobodyheardhim.Twodayslater,hismothera___70___withsomenicefood.Thebabyeaglewaswildwithjoy.Buthismotherputthefoodatthetopofthem____71_____andthenlookeddownatherbaby.Thebabyeaglecriedout.“Mum,whydidyoudothistom__72___?I’mhungry.IwilldieifIhavenothingtoeat.”“Hereisthel___73____mealthatIgiveyou.Comeandgetitbyyourself,”hismothersaid.Thensheflewdownandpushedthebabyeagleoutofthenest.Thebabyeaglef___74____down,fasterandfaster.Helookeddownattheearth.Thegr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