专题检测卷(三十四)短文改错(建议用时:40分钟) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1(2022·吉林模拟)DearDad,Youareverybusyeverydaythatyouneverpayenoughattentiontoyourhealth.Iwasworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvices.Ihearthatwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarawayfromhome,isit?Whynottowalktotheoffice?You’dbettertakeexerciseatmostonceaweek.Youcanplayabasketballinthegym.Goingtoswimisanicechoice,too.Tryingnottostayuptoolately.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.Ofcourse,thisisveryimportanttohavehealthyfood.Dad,pleasereceivemyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!Yourlovingdaughter,Mary2(2022·大庆模拟)Onceamanaskedapaintertopaintingapictureforhim.Hetoldtheartisthedidn’twanttoanyshadowsinthepicture,justsunshine,buttheartistdidso.Whenthemansawthefinishedpicture,hewasdisappointing.Withoutshadows,everythinginthepicturelooksflatandunreal.Thepointofthestoryisthatweneedbothshadowsandsunshinetohaveacompletelypicture,justasweneedbothrainandsuntohavelivingworld.People,too,needsbothsadnessandhappiness.Weoftenlearnimportantlessonduringsadtimes.Sowhenwefeelsad,weshouldtrytostopandthinkaboutthatwemightlearnfromtheexperience.3(2022·玉溪模拟)Asstudents,wehaveclassesforearlymorningtilllateafternoon.Therefore,takeaten-minutebreakbetweenclassisdefinitelyimportant,evennecessary.Otherwisewemayfeelbothphysicallyormentallytired.Duringtheten-minutebreakwedidsomethingtogetridoftiredness.Whatweneedistohaverealrest,insteadofgettingeventired.Sodon’tdoanythingthatwillmakeyoutooexcited.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleased.Iusuallytakesomeexercise.SometimeIhaveafreechatwithmyclassmates.Whenthenewclassbegins,Ifeelfreshlyagain.4(2022·天水模拟)It’sreportedthatmanypeoplediedoftrafficaccidentseachyear.Roadsafetyhasarousedthewidelyattentionofthepublic.Manyruleshavemadetoreducethetrafficcrashes,especiallyfortheonesinvolvedinthepedestrians.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakeroadsafetyseriouslyinourdailylife.Whileusedtheroad,wemustwalkonthepavementandlearntoprotectus.Besides,cardriversshouldobeythetrafficrules,thatisbothgoodfor-4-\nthemselvesandothers.Intheword,obeyingthetrafficrulesarewhatallofusshouldpayattentiontoparticularly.Afterall,lifeisnotasmallmatter.答案解析1.答案：DearDad,Youareverybusyeverydaythatyouneverpayenoughattentiontoyourhealth.soIwasworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvices.Ihearamadvicethatwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarawayfromhome,isit?Whynottowalktotheoffice?You’dbettertakeexerciseatmostonceaweek.Youcanplayaleastbasketballinthegym.Goingtoswimisanicechoice,too.TryingnottostayuptooTrylately.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.Ofcourse,thisisverylateitimportanttohavehealthyfood.Dad,pleasereceivemyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!acceptYourlovingdaughter,Mary1.【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so...that引导结果状语从句。2.【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。3.【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。4.【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。whynot+动词原形，表示建议。5.【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。atleast至少。6.【解析】将第八句中的a去掉。球类前面不加冠词。7.【解析】将第十句中的Trying改为Try。此处为祈使句，动词原形开头。8.【解析】将第十句中的lately改为late。late表示时间晚。9.【解析】将第十二句中的this改为it。it是形式主语。10.【解析】将第十三句中的receive改为accept。接受意见用accept。2.答案：Onceamanaskedapaintertopaintingapictureforhim.Hetoldtheartisthepaintdidn’twanttoanyshadowsinthepicture,justsunshine,buttheartistdidso.Whenandthemansawthefinishedpicture,hewasdisappointing.Withoutshadows,everythingdisappointedinthepicturelooksflatandunreal.Thepointofthestoryisthatweneedbothlooked-4-\nshadowsandsunshinetohaveacompletelypicture,justasweneedbothrainandsuncompletetohave∧livingworld.People,too,needsbothsadnessandhappiness.Weoftenaneedlearnimportantlessonduringsadtimes.Sowhenwefeelsad,weshouldtrytostoplessonsandthinkaboutthatwemightlearnfromtheexperience.what1.【解析】将第一句中的painting改成paint。asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事。2.【解析】将第二句中的to去掉。want后面有名词作宾语。3.【解析】将第二句中的but改成and。这里是顺承关系。4.【解析】将第三句中的disappointing改成disappointed。主语是人，用disappointed，表示感到失望的。5.【解析】将第四句中的looks改成looked。这里是过去时。6.【解析】将第五句中的completely改成complete。后面是名词picture，用形容词作定语。7.【解析】在第五句中的livingworld前加a。泛指一个。8.【解析】将第六句中的needs改成need。主语是people，为集合名词。9.【解析】将第七句中的lesson改成lessons。这里指学习各种课程。10.【解析】将第八句中的that改成what。what引导宾语从句，作learn的宾语。3.答案：Asstudents,wehaveclassesforearlymorningtilllateafternoon．Therefore,fromtakeaten-minutebreakbetweenclassisdefinitelyimportant,evennecessary.takingclassesOtherwisewemayfeelbothphysicallyormentallytired.Duringtheten-minuteandbreakwedidsomethingtogetridoftiredness.Whatweneedistohave∧realdoarest,insteadofgettingeven∧或eventired．Sodon’tdoanythingthatwillmakeyoumoretooexcited.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleased.Iusuallytakesomeexercise.pleasingSometimeIhaveafreechatwithmyclassmates.Whenthenewclassbegins,IfeelSometimesfreshlyagain.fresh1.【解析】将第一句中的for改为from。from...till固定结构，从……到……。2.【解析】将第二句中的take改为taking。构成v.-ing短语作主语。3.【解析】将第二句中的class改为classes。在两节课之间。4.【解析】将第三句中的or改为and。并列关系，与前面的both构成both...and...。5.【解析】将第四句中的did改为do。全文以一般现在时为基础时态。6.【解析】在第五句中的have后面加a。havearest休息。7.【解析】将第五句中的even去掉，或者在even后面加more。even不可以修饰形容词原级，但可以修饰比较级。8.【解析】将第七句中的pleased改为pleasing。主语是事情，故用v.-ing形式的形容词作表语。9.【解析】将第九句中的Sometime改为Sometimes。有时。-4-\n10.【解析】将第十句中的freshly改为fresh。feel是连系动词，后面用形容词作表语。4.答案：It’sreportedthatmanypeoplediedoftrafficaccidentseachyear.Roadsafetydiehasarousedthewidelyattentionofthepublic.Manyruleshave∧madetoreducewidebeenthetrafficcrashes,especiallyfortheonesinvolvedinthepedestrians.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakeroadsafetyseriouslyinourdailylife.Whileusedthetakeusingroad,wemustwalkonthepavementandlearntoprotectus.Besides,cardriversourselvesshouldobeythetrafficrules,thatisbothgoodforthemselvesandothers.whichIntheword,obeyingthetrafficrulesarewhatallofusshouldpayattentiontoaisparticularly.Afterall,lifeisnotasmallmatter.1.【解析】将第一句中的died改为die。这是一个基本事实，属于一般现在时。2.【解析】将第二句中的widely改为wide。后面是名词，用形容词作定语。3.【解析】在第三句中的have后面加been。这里是被动语态。4.【解析】将第三句中的for去掉。for在此多余。5.【解析】将第四句中的make改为take。take...seriously把……当回事。6.【解析】将第五句中的used改为using。现在分词作时间状语。7.【解析】将第五句中的us改为ourselves。保护我们自己。8.【解析】将第六句中的that改为which。that不能引导非限制性定语从句。9.【解析】将第七句中的第一个the改为a。inaword总而言之。10.【解析】将第七句中的are改为is。动名词短语作主语，谓语动词用单数。-4-
