短文改错（建议用时：40分钟）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。1（2022·杭州模拟）AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherbecomeahitontheInternetin2022.Hesuggestslivingalow-carbonlife,whichmeansusinglessenergyinourdailylifesothatwecanhelpreducingcarbondioxideintheair.Forexample,shealwayspicksupsomewastepaperonthestreetorusestheblanksidetowritesomething.WhileheiswatchingTV,healwaysturnsupthescreenbrightnesstotheminimumandturnsoffthelight.Therefore,hegoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Somepeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashow.Noonecanlivesuchasimplylifewithsomanymoderninventionaroundus.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamstronglyinsupporthisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarming,butheatleastcanenjoyahealthylife.2（2022·西湖模拟）WhenwelearnEnglish,wealwaysfindwehavedifficultiesinrememberingthenamesofthemonths.Therefore,ifweknowsomethingaboutthehistoryofthemonths,possiblyitwon’tbeveryharderforustorememberit.Thefollowingisoneexample.TheJanuarywasnamedafterGodJanus.Hewasastrangegodbecausehehastwofaces.Hecouldlookintwodirections.Hecouldlookforwardorbackwardatthesametime.Hewasthegodofendingsandbeginnings.JanuaryisthemonthonwhichonelooksforwardtotheNewYearandit’salsoaperiodoftimehowpeoplethinkaboutthepastyear.Nowcanyousharewithusthestoriesaboutrestofthemonths?3-6-\n（2022·杭州二模）Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustocomeatastop.30minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothupsetandannoyed,Idecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.Now,wheneverIamclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthisexperience.4Tomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinthemorningandwasalwayslatewithwork.Hisbosswantedtofirehimifhedidn’tstartcomingontime,buthewenttothedoctorforahelp.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttobed.Themandidastoldandsleptreallywell,wakeupevenbeforethealarmwentoff.Hehadtimeforaproperlybreakfastandwasstillthefirstreachthefactory.“Boss,”hesaid,“thatmedicinereallywork!”“I’mpleasingtohearit,”saidhisboss,“butwherewereyouyesterday?”答案解析1答案：AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherbecomeahitontheInternetin2022.becameHesuggestslivingalow-carbonlife,whichmeansusinglessenergyinourdailylifesothatwecanhelpreducingcarbondioxideintheair.Forexample,shealwaysreducehepicksupsomewastepaperonthestreetorusestheblanksidetowritesomething.andWhileheiswatchingTV,healwaysturnsupthescreenbrightnesstotheminimumdownandturnsoffthelight.Therefore,hegoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Some-6-\nBesidespeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashow.Noonecanlivesuchasimplylifewithsimplesomanymoderninventionaroundus.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamstronglyininventionssupport∧hisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonofglobalwarming,butheatleastcanenjoyahealthylife1.【解析】将第一句中的become改为became。时间状语为2022，所以用过去时。2.【解析】将第二句中的reducing改为reduce。help（to）dosth.为固定用法。3.【解析】将第三句中的she改为he。很显然，这里指的是前面的youngman，所以用he。4.【解析】将第三句中的or改为and。捡起废纸，在反面的空白处写是两个先后的动作，应该用and连接。5.【解析】将第四句中的up改为down。节约能源，应该是把电视屏幕亮度调小，用turndown符合句意。6.【解析】将第五句中的Therefore改为Besides。下文的“goestoworkbybike”是过低碳生活的另一行动，和前文是递进关系，所以用Besides。7.【解析】将第七句中的simply改为simple。用形容词形式修饰名词，作定语。8.【解析】将第七句中的invention改为inventions。invention为可数名词，前面有many修饰，所以用复数形式。9.【解析】在第八句中的support后加of。insupportof为固定搭配，意思是：支持。10.【解析】将第九句中的but去掉。前面已经用了Although，后面就不能用but。需要注意的是：因为涉及大小写的调整，不能去掉Although。2答案：WhenwelearnEnglish,wealwaysfindwehavedifficultiesinrememberingthedifficultynamesofthemonths.Therefore,ifweknowsomethingaboutthehistoryoftheHowevermonths,possiblyitwon’tbeveryharderforustorememberit.Thefollowinghardthemisoneexample.TheJanuarywasnamedafterGodJanus.Hewasastrangegodbecausehehastwo-6-\nfaces.Hecouldlookintwodirections.Hecouldlookhadforwardorbackwardatthesametime.Hewasthegodofendingsandbeginnings.andJanuaryisthemonthonwhichonelooksforwardtotheNewYearandit’salsoainperiodoftimehowpeoplethinkaboutthepastyear.whenNowcanyousharewithusthestoriesabout∧restofthemonths?the1.【解析】将第一句中的difficulties改为difficulty。havedifficultyindoing做……有困难，此处difficulty不用复数。2.【解析】将第二句中的Therefore改为However。考查前后句的关系，表示转折关系。3.【解析】将第二句中的harder改为hard。Itisveryhardforsb.todosth.对某人来说做某事很难。very只修饰形容词原级。4.【解析】将第二句中的第二个it改为them。因为这里指代前面的复数名词names，因此用them。5.【解析】将第四句中January前的The去掉。月份前不加冠词。6.【解析】将第五句中的has改为had。对过去发生的事情的描述，用过去时。7.【解析】将第七句中的or改为and。从上文“lookintwodirections”可以看出，他能够向前看和向后看，所以用forwardandbackward。8.【解析】将第九句中的on改为in。定语从句先行词是themonth，在某月里用介词in。9.【解析】将第九句中的how改为when。先行词为aperiodoftime，表一段时间，后面的定语从句用when作时间状语。10.【解析】在第十句中的rest前加the。therestof剩下的，余下的。3答案：Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaited∧abustocomeforatastop.30minutespast,butnobuscame.Bothupsetandannoyed,Idecidedtopassed-6-\nwalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedfootthanforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldthehavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.Beinganotherdidimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.Now,wheneverIampossiblyclosetolosemypatience,I’llthinkofthisexperience.losing1.【解析】在第二句中的waited后加for。waitfor为固定短语，意思是：等候……。2.【解析】将第三句中的past改为passed。由came可知谓语动词应用过去式。pass意思是：过去，经过。3.【解析】将第四句中的feet改为foot。onfoot为固定短语，意思是：步行。4.【解析】将第五句中的when改为than。“nosooner...than”为固定句型。5.【解析】将第七句中的a改为the。这里特指的是下一辆车，所以用定冠词the。6.【解析】将第七句中的other改为another。这里指的是再等30分钟，所以用another。7.【解析】将第八句中的do改为did。这里描述的是过去的事情，所以应该用did。8.【解析】将第九句中的possible改为possibly。修饰谓语动词waste，用副词。9.【解析】将第九句中的it去掉。关系代词that就是put的宾语，所以应该去掉it。10.【解析】将第十句中的lose改为losing。becloseto中to为介词，后面的动词应该用-ing形式。4答案：Tomwashavingmuchtroublesgettingupinthemorningandwasalwayslatetroublewithwork.Hisbosswantedtofirehimifhedidn’tstartcomingontime,butheforandwenttothedoctorforahelp.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtotakethembeforehewenttobed.Themandidastoldandsleptreallywell,wakeupitwaking-6-\nevenbeforethealarmwentoff.Hehadtimeforaproperlybreakfastandwasstillproperthefirst∧reachthefactory.“Boss,”hesaid,“thatmedicinereallyworks!”“I’mtoworkpleasingtohearit,”saidhispleasedboss,“butwherewereyouyesterday?”pleased-6-
