专题检测卷(三十三)短文改错(建议用时:40分钟) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1Iwasahonestchildindeed.Ididn’tdaretotellliesbecauseofmyeyesoftenletthesecretout.Irememberedtellingalietomyparents,andIcouldhardfixeyesonmyfather’sface,letalonemymother’seyes.Iglancedhereandthere,upanddownnervous.However,afterIcametoBeijing,InolongerhavetoworryaboutmynervouseyesbecauseeverythingIwantedtospeakwassentbyletter.Ifoundmyselfoftentellsmalllies.Iwrote“I’mwellinBeijing.Ienjoythefoodsellingattheuniversity.Andatweekends,Ioftenbuyfriedchickensorporktoeat.”2(2022·大庆模拟)Recently,asthedevelopmentoftheInternet,thereisakindoflanguagecallingWeblanguage.SomepeopleevenspeakChinesemixedwithEnglishletters.TheotherdayourclasshadadiscussionaboutifweshouldwelcometheWeblanguage.Fortypercentofthestudentsthinkitridiculous.Theyarguethatitdoesnogoodtohelppeoplecommunicate,norisitusefulforlearningEnglish.Besides,it’llmakeChinesemorestandardandpure,finallyruiningourmothertongue.However,60%ofourclassisfondofit.Theythinkitissimple,convenienceandhelpfulinexpressingthem.What’smore,itmaymakethelanguagemoreinteresting.Personally,it’snotgoodhabittousetheWeblanguage.Itmaybepopular,butyoumayalsomakeyourselfbemisunderstood.3(2022·昆明模拟)MyfriendshipwithYangQingbeganwhenwemeetinourschoolphotoclub.Fromthenonwebecamegoodfriend.Wehadcommoninterestinbasketballandoftensharedtheirexperienceaboutphotographing.Onweekendswerodetoplaythebasketballtogether.NowinSenior3,weseldomplaytogether,orstillkeepintouchandencourageeachother.Withtheentranceexamcomesnear,I’mworriedaboutwhatmylifewilllikeaswemaygotodifferentuniversities.Butnowwhatdoesn’tworrymeanymorebecauseIknowjustastheoldsayinggoes:Trulyfriendshipwillalwaysliveonnomatterwherefarapartweare.4(2022·乌鲁木齐模拟)Chocolateismanypeoplefavoritefood.Peopleoftenusepencilstowriteordrawwith.It’sdifficulttoputthosetwodifferentthingstogether.AndsomepeoplemadechocolatepencilsinJapan.Theyarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongchocolateloverallovertheworld.Youcanusethemtowriteordrawwith,butyoucanonly-4-\neatthem.Thesweetlypencilsarenotonlyintheshapeofrealpencils,butalsohaveaspecial“pencilsharpener”comeswiththem.Youcanusethemtosharpenthechocolatepencilsandputtingtheshavingsoncakesorotherdesserts.Maybethisisagoodnewsforchildwhoenjoychewingontheendsoftheirpencils.答案解析1.答案：Iwasahonestchildindeed.Ididn’tdaretotellliesbecauseofmyeyesoftenletanthesecretout.Irememberedtellingalietomyparents,andIcouldhardfix∧eyeshardlymyonmyfather’sface,letalonemymother’seyes.Iglancedhereandthere,upanddownnervous.However,afterIcametoBeijing,InolongerhavetoworryaboutnervouslyhadmynervouseyesbecauseeverythingIwantedtospeakwassentbyletter.Ifoundsaymyselfoftentellsmalllies.Iwrote“I’mwellinBeijing.Ienjoythefoodsellingattellingsoldtheuniversity.Andatweekends,Ioftenbuyfriedchickensorporktoeat.”chicken1.【解析】将第一句中的a改为an。honest是以元音音素开头，需要用an。2.【解析】将第二句中的of去掉。这里是一个原因状语从句。3.【解析】将第三句中的hard改为hardly。hardly表示几乎不。4.【解析】在第三句的fix之后加my。fixone’seyeson凝视于……。5.【解析】将第四句中的nervous改为nervously。修饰动词glance，用副词。6.【解析】将第五句中的have改为had。全文基本时态是过去时。7.【解析】将第五句中的speak改为say。speak一般跟语言，say后接说话的内容。8.【解析】将第六句中的tell改为telling。作found的宾语补足语，表示正在做……。9.【解析】将第八句中的selling改为sold。thefood与sell之间为被动关系，所以用过去分词短语作后置定语。10.【解析】将第九句中的chickens改为chicken。chicken作“鸡肉”讲，为不可数名词。2.答案：Recently,asthedevelopmentoftheInternet,thereisakindoflanguagecallingwithcalledWeblanguage.SomepeopleevenspeakChinesemixedwithEnglishletters.TheotherdayourclasshadadiscussionaboutifweshouldwelcometheWeblanguage.whetherFortypercentofthestudentsthinkitridiculous.Theyarguethatitdoesnogoodtohelppeoplecommunicate,norisitusefulforlearningEnglish.Besides,it’llmakehelpingChinesemorestandardandpure,finallyruiningourmothertongue.However,60%oflessourclassisfondofit.Theythinkitissimple,convenienceandhelpfulinexpressingareconvenient-4-\nthem.What’smore,itmaymakethelanguagemoreinteresting.themselvesPersonally,it’snot∧goodhabittousetheWeblanguage.Itmaybepopular,abutyoumayalsomakeyourselfbemisunderstood.1.【解析】将第一句中的as改为with。with+名词，表示伴随情况，此处指随着网络的发展。2.【解析】将第一句中的calling改为called。这里是过去分词作后置定语，“被称为……”的意思。3.【解析】将第三句中的if改为whether。介词后面不能使用if引导的宾语从句，应该用whether。4.【解析】将第五句中的help改为helping。donogoodto后面要使用v.-ing形式。5.【解析】将第六句中的more改为less。根据意思，应该是使得汉语不那么标准了。6.【解析】将第七句中的is改为are。这里的class指班上的同学们，不是班级。7.【解析】将第八句中的convenience改为convenient。与前面的simple和后面的helpful是并列的形容词作表语。8.【解析】将第八句中的them改为themselves。expressoneself，表达自己的观点，是一个固定词组。9.【解析】在第十句中的not后面加上a。这里指不是一个好习惯。10.【解析】把第十一句中的第二个be去掉。makeoneselfunderstood是一个固定词组，使自己被理解。3.答案：MyfriendshipwithYangQingbeganwhenwemeetinourschoolphotoclub．metFromthenonwebecamegoodfriend.Wehadcommoninterestinbasketballandfriendsoftensharedtheirexperienceaboutphotographing.Onweekendswerodetoplayourthebasketballtogether.NowinSenior3,weseldomplaytogether,orstillkeepinbuttouchandencourageeachother.Withtheentranceexamcomesnear,I’mworriedcomingaboutwhatmylifewill∧likeaswemaygotodifferentuniversities.Butnowbewhatdoesn’tworrymeanymorebecauseIknowjustastheoldsayinggoes:TrulyitTruefriendshipwillalwaysliveonnomatterwherefarapartweare．how1.【解析】将第一句中的meet改为met。前面是began，时态一致。2.【解析】将第二句中的friend改为friends。主语是we，friend用复数形式。3.【解析】将第三句中的their改为our。前面是we，代词一致。4.【解析】将第四句中的the去掉。球类前面不用冠词。5.【解析】将第五句中的or改为but。这里是转折关系。6.【解析】将第六句中的comes改为coming。这里是with的复合结构。7.【解析】在第六句中的will后面加be。like是介词，前面需要用动词be。8.【解析】将第七句中的what改为it。it代指上句中提到的事情。9.【解析】将第八句中的Truly改为True。后面是名词friendship，用形容词修饰。10.【解析】将第八句中的where改为how。构成howfar。4.答案：Chocolateismanypeoplefavoritefood.Peopleoftenusepencilstowriteor-4-\npeople’sdrawwith.It’sdifficulttoputthosetwodifferentthingstogether.AndsomepeopleButmadechocolatepencilsinJapan.Theyarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongchocolateloverallovertheworld.Youcanusethemtowriteordrawwith,butyouloverscan’tcanonlyeatthem.Thesweetlypencilsarenotonlyintheshapeofrealpencils,butsweetalsohaveaspecial“pencilsharpener”comeswiththem.Youcanusethemtocoming或在comes前加that或whichitsharpenthechocolatepencilsandputtingtheshavingsoncakesorotherdesserts.putMaybethisisagoodnewsforchildwhoenjoychewingontheendsoftheirpencils.children1.【解析】将第一句中的people改为people’s。这里指很多人最喜爱的食物，用所有格。2.【解析】将第四句中的And改为But。这里是转折关系，而不是递进关系。3.【解析】将第五句中的lover改为lovers。指热爱巧克力的人们。4.【解析】将第六句中的can改为can’t。这里指不能的意义。5.【解析】将第七句中的sweetly改为sweet。pencils名词，需要形容词作定语。6.【解析】将第七句中的comes改为coming。现在分词短语作定语，或者前面加that/which，构成定语从句。7.【解析】将第八句中的them改为it。指代前面的pencilsharpener。8.【解析】将第八句中的putting改为put。与前面的sharpen并列。9.【解析】将第九句中的a去掉。news不可数名词。10.【解析】将第九句中的child改为children。who引导定语从句，修饰先行词,由enjoy谓语动词为复数形式可知用children。-4-
