专题检测卷(三十二)短文改错(建议用时:40分钟) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1(2022·哈尔滨模拟)Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmywholelife!LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadsaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.Webegantoplaysnow!Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.Wewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateachother.2ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.3(2022·绵阳模拟)LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Thatday,eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.4(2022·辽宁模拟)NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisrathercommon.Toreduceit,thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelp.Firstofall,knowexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.Secondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findawaytorelaxyouoccasionally,forexample,youcanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwithothers,suchas,yourclassmates,yourteachers,yourparents.-4-\nTheywillunderstandyouandcometoyourhelpwhenyouarereallyinthetrouble.Inaword,nevergetyourselfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.答案解析1.答案：Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmyhavewholelife!LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinifhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadtakesaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwordwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookrealforabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowontheclimbedtrees.Webegantoplay∧snow!Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.withWewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitatthemeachother.1.【解析】第一句had→have。主句谓语动词是一般现在时态,所以,状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态,不可能是过去完成时态。2.【解析】第二句because→if。在that引导的宾语从句中,又包含一个条件状语从句。在爸爸许诺时,考试还没进行,所以,应该用if引导条件状语从句。3.【解析】第二句bring→take。此处的take表示“带我们去”,不能用bring。4.【解析】第四句words→word。keepone’sword是固定词组,意为“遵守诺言”。5.【解析】第五句really→real。用形容词修饰名词。6.【解析】第六句at→for。forChristmasvacation意为“去度圣诞假期”。7.【解析】第七句climb→climbed。文章叙述的是过去的事情,故应用一般过去时态。8.【解析】第八句play后面加with。playwithsnow意为“玩雪”。9.【解析】第十句去掉the。littlechildren表示泛指,其前面不用定冠词。10.【解析】第十一句第二个it→them。此处的them指的是snowballs,而不是snow。2.答案：ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighdecidedschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollaringettingdollarsmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentwhentotallyexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold∧.Ihavetobemorecareful-4-\nbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheirtoadvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.IhavemaderulesforadviceOnmetofollow.myself1.【解析】将第一句中的decide改为decided。全文时态以过去时为主。2.【解析】将第二句中的get改为getting。havetrouble(in)+doing。3.【解析】将第三句中的dollar改为dollars。前面有fifty。4.【解析】将第四句中的while改为when。when就在这时，并列连词。5.【解析】将第五句中的total改为totally。修饰后面的形容词用副词。6.【解析】将第六句中的of去掉。这里是because引导原因状语从句。7.【解析】在第六句中的told后面加上to。不定式省略，但不定式符号to需保留。8.【解析】将第七句中的advices改为advice。advice为不可数名词。9.【解析】将第八句中的In改为On。ontheotherhand固定词组，另一方面。10.【解析】将第九句中的me改为myself。这里是为自己的意思。3.答案：LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,wereaswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,to∧children.Theywerethedelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgivegiftsgaveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemleavingourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Thatday,eachoneofsoushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theyouringaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressionondeepus.1.【解析】将第一句中的had去掉。LastSaturday是一般过去时的时间状语。2.【解析】将第二句中的was改为were。that引导的定语从句修饰先行词manybooks,在从句中作主语，谓语动词用复数。3.【解析】在第二句中的to后面加上the。特指那些孩子们。4.【解析】将第三句中的gift改为gifts。前面是these。5.【解析】将第四句中的give改为gave。与前面的played为并列谓语。6.【解析】将第五句中的leave改为leaving。before是介词，后面应用动名词。7.【解析】将第五句中的but改为so。这里是因果关系。8.【解析】将第七句中的第一个their改为our。与前面的we呼应。9.【解析】将第七句中的for改为in。inreturn作为回报。10.【解析】将第八句中的deeply改为deep。impression是名词，用形容词修饰。4.答案：-4-\nNowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisgenerallyrathercommon.Toreduceit,thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelp.Firstofall,knowfollowingexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.leadsSecondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchthat/whichotherpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findawaytorelaxyouoccasionally,forexample,yourselfyoucanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwithswimmingfriendsothers,suchas,yourclassmates,yourteachers,∧yourparents.Theywilland/orunderstandyouandcometoyourhelpwhenyouarereallyinthetrouble.Inaword,nevergetyourselfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.1.【解析】将第一句中的general改为generally。这里使用副词，修饰动词短语befacedwith。2.【解析】将第二句中的followed改为following。使用形容词following作名词的定语，意思是“下面的”。3.【解析】将第三句的lead改为leads。主语是what，谓语动词用单数形式。4.【解析】将第四句中的what改为that或者which。这里是一个定语从句，that/which在从句中作主语。5.【解析】将第四句中的another改为other。这里是一个固定词组，inotherwords换句话说。6.【解析】将第五句中的you改为yourself。使自己放松。7.【解析】将第五句中的swim改为swimming。goswimming是一个固定词组，去游泳。8.【解析】将第六句中的friend改为friends。makefriendswith与……交朋友，是一个固定形式。9.【解析】在第六句中的yourparents前面加上and或者or。起连接作用。10.【解析】把第七句中的the去掉。introuble是一个固定词组，表示陷入麻烦。-4-
