短文改错（建议用时：40分钟）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。1（2022·台州模拟）Ilikemusicverymuch,particularpopsongs.EveryeveningthenIamdoinghomeworkandonweekendswhenIamathome,Ialwaysplaysomeofmyfavoritesongsonmytaperecorder.Thefamiliarpatternsofnotesattractsmeintothecolourfullyworldofmusic.NowandthenIstoppedtofollowthesongs.Sometimes,mymothercomesin,askingmetofixmyattentiontomyhomework.Shedoesnotlikethepopmusic.Likemostgrown-ups,sheenjoysfolksongs,becausethepeacefulmusicremindsheroftheirbeautifullifewhenshewasyoung.Itisatruthwhichpeopleofdifferentageunderstandmusicdifferentlyandenjoydifferentkindsofmusic.2FiveyearsbeforemybrotherandIendedourfriendshipasaresultofthequarrel.OnedayhevisitedthecitythatIwaslivingintoseeourmother.Ithoughtfornightsaboutwhattoreacttohisvisit.SinceIhaddonenowrong,soitwashethatneededtocometome.Finally,Iwenttomyfriendsforadvice.HesuggestedIofferedmyapology.WhenIdidit,Ifeltrelieving.TodayIamsogratefultomyfriend.Withouthisadvice,wewouldn’tenjoythelovingrelationshipwithmybrother.Ihavelearnedatrulylifelessonfromthewholeexperience.Inshort,IfeelIhavegrownsince.3Lastevening,IwenttoteahousewithmybestfriendSusan.Beforetheteawasserving，wetalkedtoeachotherhappily．Whenthewaiterwenttouswiththetea,wedidn’tseehim.Unfortunately,Susanraisesherhandtocombherhairjustwhilethewaiterbenttoputtheplateonthetable.Hishandhitthecup，andtheteawasspattered(溅)onhertrousers.Inmy-4-\nsurprise，insteadofcomplaining，Susansmiled，“Soluckythatit’snotonmyshirt，andIcan’tevencleanit.”Herwordswereveryinspired.Wecannotforeseewhatwillhappen，butlookingatitinapositivewaycanmakeusalwaysbehappy．4DearLiMei,Withthemid-termexamcome,youmustgetpreparedforthem.Ithinkthatyouneedisarightstudymethod.Whatweallknow,therearethreestageinstudy—preview,studyinclassandreview,amongwhichreviewwasthemostimportant.Youshouldfirstmakeareviewplan,thenstickonit.Ifollowmyreviewplanstrictlyandhavemadeaprogressinmystudy.Itturnsouttobegoodenough.Ofcourse,therearemorethanonewaytoreview.Solongasyoureviewregular,I’msureyoucanfindmorewaystostudywell.Ifyouhaveanyquestionaboutsubjects,askmeI’llbegladtohelpyou.WemaymeetinourschoollibraryeveryFridayafternoon.Yours,LiHua答案解析1答案:Ilikemusicverymuch,particularpopsongs.EveryeveningthenIamparticularlywhendoinghomeworkandonweekendswhenIamathome,Ialwaysplaysomeofmyfavoritesongsonmytaperecorder.Thefamiliarpatternsofnotesattractsmeintotheattractcolourfullyworldofmusic.NowandthenIstoppedtofollowthesongs.colourfulstopSometimes,mymothercomesin,askingmetofixmyattentiontomyhomework.Sheondoesnotlikethepopmusic.Likemostgrown-ups,sheenjoysfolksongs,becausethepeacefulmusicremindsheroftheirbeautifullifewhenshewasyoung.Itisatruthher-4-\nwhichpeopleofdifferentageunderstandmusicdifferentlyandenjoydifferentthatageskindsofmusic.2答案:FiveyearsbeforemybrotherandIendedourfriendshipasaresultoftheagoaquarrel.OnedayhevisitedthecitythatIwaslivingintoseeourmother.Ithoughtfornightsaboutwhattoreacttohisvisit.SinceIhaddonenowrong,soitwashethathowneededtocometome.Finally,Iwenttomyfriendsforadvice.HesuggestedIfriendofferedmyapology.WhenIdidit,Ifeltrelieving.TodayIamsogratefultoofferrelievedmyfriend.Withouthisadvice,wewouldn’tenjoythelovingrelationshipwithmyIbrother.Ihavelearnedatrulylifelessonfromthewholeexperience.Inshort,IfeelItruehavegrown∧upsince.3答案:Lastevening,Iwentto∧teahousewithmybestfriendSusan.Beforetheteaawasserving，wetalkedtoeachotherhappily．Whenthewaiterwenttouswithservedcamethetea,wedidn’tseehim.Unfortunately,Susanraisesherhandtocombherhairjustraisedwhilethewaiterbenttoputtheplateonthetable.Hishandhitthecup，andthe-4-\nwhenHerteawasspattered(溅)onhertrousers.Inmysurprise，insteadofcomplaining，SusanTosmiled，“Soluckythatit’snotonmyshirt，andIcan’tevencleanit.”Herwordswereorveryinspired.Wecannotforeseewhatwillhappen，butlookingatitinapositivewayinspiringcanmakeusalwaysbehappy．4答案：DearLiMei,Withthemid-termexamcome,youmustgetpreparedforthem.Ithinkthatcomingitwhatyouneedisarightstudymethod.Whatweallknow,therearethreestageinAsstagesstudy—preview,studyinclassandreview,amongwhichreviewwasthemostisimportant.Youshouldfirstmakeareviewplan,thenstickonit.Ifollowmyreviewplanstrictlyandhavemadeaprogressinmystudy.Itturnsouttobegoodenough.Ofcourse,therearemorethanonewaytoreview.Solongasyoureviewregular,isregularlyI’msureyoucanfindmorewaystostudywell.Ifyouhaveanyquestionaboutsubjects,askme∧I’llbegladtohelpyou.WeandmaymeetinourschoollibraryeveryFridayafternoon.Yours,LiHua-4-
